The Meme To Life In A Breathmint

[ladyofavalon77]

Pulling over to the side of the highway, Frank took what was left of the mint from Meme before examining it more closely. Hidden within the speckled white candy shell was a piece of twisted coral rock.  Frank quickly took out the other mints to examine them as well and discovered more misshapen pieces of coral underneath the minty shell.  Holding

Comments

[spooky_nine]

They'll never make it to Vegas at this rate.

*looks abashed*

[ladyofavalon77]

I had planned to have them already in Vegas but the breathmint challenge stopped me :) They should be there by the next entry :)

[basric]

And so the tension builds. Nicely don.

Thanks again :)

[ladyofavalon77]

It's great to have feedback!

+1!

[banerry]

Re: +1!

[ladyofavalon77]

Thanks :D

[phried]

I like that you didn't let defined species boundaries keep you from writing Meme's puzzle hobby into this story!

I was trying for something different :)

[ladyofavalon77]

Glad it worked out and I love your icon :)

[nightshadow_t2]

Hmm. I dunno. Mysterious person showing up out of the blue. She's quite possibly an enemy.

Nicely done. :)

hehe thanks

[ladyofavalon77]

It could definitely go either way. If mine gets picked, I'll see which is more interesting!