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Sep 28, 2008 22:16

Title: The Distance and the Damage
Author: broken__records
Pairing: Jim/Pam
Word Count: 4233
Rating: M
Summary: S3 AU. She twists the gold band on her finger around and around. She waits to feel regret or guilt or something else besides this buzzing excitement.

shapeless secrets )

the office, jim/pam

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anonymous September 29 2008, 16:14:57 UTC
This is the best thing I have read in a very long time, may even be the best thing I have ever read. The writing is exceptional, so raw and so real and so everything.

I remember having a discussion with one of my friends about the best type of books. She said that all books should have happy endings. But I say that books should leave you with some sort of emotion, good or bad, long after the final page has been turned, long after it's been put on the shelf.

Even though this isn't a book, I have the feeling that this will be staying with me for a very long time. Thank you.

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everycliche131 September 29 2008, 19:21:21 UTC
i feel like screaming!
this was amazing!!!

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bebitched September 29 2008, 23:04:57 UTC
Woooooooow. I love your AUs. They're always beautiful and twisty without being pointless like a lot of other AU fics, because they aren't there as a band-aid to kiss it and make it better. Just... guh. Every single image was so poignant and real.

This was gorgeous.

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tunaeverynight September 30 2008, 07:00:09 UTC
THIS IS SO WONDERFUL ERIN. SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WONDERFUL. And blissfully epic and just fabulous.

S3 AU fic is my absolute favorite kind of fic ever ever ever because I love the angst and emotion that came with that season and it just lends itself perfectly to stuff like this.

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mollyx365 February 6 2009, 05:46:10 UTC
I really can't review b/c I am speechless. It's heartbreaking and beautiful.

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