Supernatural Fanfic: Reassurance NC-17 Sam/Dean, Dean/OFC

[fpvs]

Title: Reassurance
Author: fpvs
Fandom: Supernatural
Pairings: Sam/Dean, Dean/OFC
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Incest, underage sex, rimming (*pouts* no-one lists rimming anymore!)
Word Count: 7,758
Summary: Set directly after Crossroad Blues. Sam sees Dean angsting and takes it upon himself to make him better.
Disclaimer: The boys aren’t mine. They’re

Comments

[terriblesix]

It's Jenn. Can you believe I remember the PW for an account I’ve use ONCE, but not my main. Silly me.

I’m so happy that you finished and posted it! Very, very proud too.
I loved it, of course. I’ve been anticipating reading this fic in full for awhile and you should know that I’m defiantly not let down. If I were a guy, I’d let you know exactly how up I am. *wiggles eyebrows*
Oh, and you’re very welcome for the NYC-morning-bathroom-fic-writing time. XD Anytime, really.

P.S: Any reason you named her Jenny? o.O XD

[fpvs]

YAY! You remembered A password! lol (Hey, it's better than nothing... lol)

*sigh* You're proud of me? THANKYOU!!! :D I'm proud of me too :)

lol... And, yeah... Oh, yeah... Thankyou... For making me sit on a hard floor... Cos I can't sleep and decided to write my fic... rofl

Not really any reason why the character was Jenny... But you're the reason I had to make her nice :D

[arsilver_angel]

Hmm... so you want some negative feedback eh? Ok.. well.. let's see. First off, there was entirely too much clothing. *cough* Well.. for the first few minutes.. I mean.. You should just have started the fic off with Sam and Dean already being naked.. and angsty.. right after some rough and tumbling with a big bad.. Yah, I know how seriously that DOESN'T work.. but.. you wanted negative..

Ok, so now that we've cleared the negative air, you know it's amazing. You know I already told you it was completely, ungodly hot. So.. what are you doing? Get crackin on some more fic writing woman! XD

[fpvs]

Shit! You know, I expected SOME .... 'constructive criticism'.... And you KNOW it had to start with them clothed. *glares* lol

*sigh* I can't believe people are actually demanding new fic... Sheesh... That last one took well over 2 months to get posted. *glares* Clearly I won't be hand-writing the next one? Hmm??? lol

Did you like how I .... Editted the ending? :) I think I... Fixed it. lol. Whatcha think? Did I make it better??? ... Or just... different?

[arsilver_angel]

Hahaha! I know! Who do those people think they are demanding new stuff.... Sheesh!

XD!! That just means you were quite awesome. To which, you are. ><

The ending was much much better. It has a nicer flow now. Congrats!!! As always, feel free to shift any formulating ideas my way.

[fpvs]

*rolls eyes* So are you saying I couldn't do better? That there were absolutely NO FLAWS I should/could work on? Hmm? HMM??? *stares*

But, thankyou. I'm so conflicted... That I've got nothing but good feedback. lol.... Though I know what I often don't reply if I don't love a fic... But... *whimpers* *WANTS THAT FEEDBACK* lol ARGH! rofl

But trust me, I'll be bugging you for help should I need it :)
*goes to find Plot!Bunny book*

*teehehe* People demanding new fic.... *blushes*

[miss_anthrpe]

First off thanx so much for leaving me the link to this fic.

Secondly how hot is that. I read it at work cause i just couldn't wait and had to tell people that i was coming down with something to explain the flushed feverish look and heavy breathing.

The flash backs are my fav part i love seeing little windows into how they became the way they are.

And broken Dean is always beautiful. I really hope that you continue this story.

[fpvs]

You're MOST welcome for the link! lol. *desired Feedback

OMG

[katiilouise_x]

Okay, first I think i might need to go sit in a fridge for a few minutes.

After my brain stops spinning from the thought of this I'd like to say VERY WELL WRITTEN!

I love the way sam looks after Dean, and the way dean is all angsty.

And no of all, i love the buttsekkz.
:D

Lol, veryyyyyy good.
Write more, you're awesome at it.

xx

Re: OMG

[fpvs]

*teehehe* Thankyou. I'm glad you liked it :D

I've got a list of Plot!Bunnies... But the thing I need to do is sit down and WRITE SOMETHING! lol But more will come... Eventually. And there WILL BE butt sex! lol

Holy.

[anonymous]

Ok- First, it's weird reading this while I'm iming you on msn. rotf.
CUZ IT WAS HOT! And I may have to leave the computer to go take care of some business. ROTF.
But seriously, you wrote them perfectly. I could absolutely envision the face Sammy made when he was like ,"Don't slap my ass!" !! I was dying. lol.
Very Very sexy stuff, nicely written, and I thought the ending was perfect just like that.
More please.

Miss Michelle.

Re: Holy.

[fpvs]

*hehe* I made u all horny... *haha* (YOUR WORDS, NOT MINE!)
I'm all SQUEE about u liking it.

And I will post more... Eventually. lol. I've written the first two lines! *nods* lol It will be Daddy!Kink... *wonders how many people she can put off by just the warning/summary* I see it as a challenge... *mwahahaha*

[anonymous]

*cowering from the threat of a pitchfork*

OMG that absolutely rocked.

My brain has turned to mush. You better get your backside into gear and write the next one. I want more and i challange you to put me off.

Helen

[fpvs]

Pfff... Seriously! Everyone's all, "WRITE MORE"... What's a girl to think?
*starting to feel guilty that she's only gotten 2 lines written* *hehe*