from an abandoned project

[fpb]

Mine eyes have seen the glory of the coming of the Lord.Suddenly the very colour of the morning was changed. An army, a vile and immense army, still filled the Strath Hog between the Hill of Hogwarts and the ridge of Beinn-na-Rig and Beinn Dhu. It polluted Hogsmeade and the fields where wizard children - some of them now part of that murderous

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[cheyinka]

Oo, I really like this - abandoned or not, it's a really well-written fragment. I especially liked that the side of Light sang, but the Other Guys didn't, and I liked the way you described Voldemort's forces with The colours of Voldemort’s front line were mud shot though here and there with delirium.