Level Two - Whirlpool of Lies (Chapter One 2/3)

[cutiekatluv]

Comments

[rubyjn]

Oooh...(I spy Naruto lol)
Man, I didn't even catch that Donghae was hiding something until the confrontation! even though you hinted that something was off when Kyuhyun brought Sungmin to rest. Haha then i realised why Donghae didn't use his 'element' to help when they were fighting against the octopus.

You should compile this, print and publish!! I'll love you for life :3 haha~

thank you for starting on Level 2!! Can't wait for what's coming next! I have a feeling that Ryeowook might come out, if the last person in the poster/picture is of him! :)

[cutiekatluv]

Naruto, Avatar the Last Airbender and I could you could say Spy Kids too. xDD

Donghae is tricky~~~ Don't trust him and his cute smile! :D

Haha, I wish. That'd be amazing~ :)

:D Thank YOU for reading! Haha, maybe~ ^^

[coffiee]

Oh Donghae! Just tells Kyuhyun the truth!!
And the story is getting more and more interesting!! XD

And I'm curious with sungmin's condition!!

Looking forward for the next chapter!! XD XD XD

[cutiekatluv]

XD Glad you like it! :D

Don't worry, it's Sungmin. I could never kill Sungmin. (maybe...)

Thank you for reading! :DD

[blueings]

Kyuhyun still has his intelligence in this world!! Yeah!!
I wonder what donghae's motives though..
Hmmph~ very interesting..

[cutiekatluv]

Yayyy~! -hifives-

Hehe, you'll see :)

Thanks for reading!

[cutiekatluv]

Haha, don't worry, you're not. xD I'm like, the most horrible writer since I haven't updated this fic in forever... I really need to get onto that. :/

Anyway, thank you so much! :D I'm glad I was able to explain it clearly. ^^ Sometimes things just make sense in my head and not to anyone else.. Hehe xD

Nothing's fishy! It's just Donghae. xD Thanks for reading, I'll try to update soon! ^^