LJ Idol 10: Week 2--That One Friend

[fourzoas]

City Diner
Metairie, LA

Comments

[marlawentmad]

I love the list making sections  in this; it has a beautiful rhythm. 

[fourzoas]

Thank you!

[halfshellvenus]

I like the use of repetition and so much realism here, in contrast with what comes off as the fear of losing yourself so completely to someone who may not feel anywhere near as strongly about you in return. There's a sense of regretting something even before it happens, but hoping for the miracle of regret not being needed.

[alphaloria]

Dang.

This is spectacular.

[kehlen]

I really like the rhythm and how the thoughts of thee narrator keep circling around the same poit.

[unmowngrass]

incredible