Comments | fourzoas: LJ Idol, Season 9, Week 6: step on a crack

fourzoas

Apr 21, 2014 14:24

( I am high gloss, )

Comments 15

bleodswean April 21 2014, 19:35:21 UTC

I enjoyed this.

fourzoas April 22 2014, 19:27:58 UTC

I'm glad you did-thanks!

adoptedwriter April 21 2014, 19:40:25 UTC

Sensual and interesting! AW

fourzoas April 22 2014, 19:28:29 UTC

The sensual was a surprise; when I started, I was thinking more about cracks in a personality, but the words went where they would...

itsjustc April 22 2014, 13:09:39 UTC

I enjoyed reading this. I like how you have presented it.

fourzoas April 22 2014, 19:28:41 UTC

Thank you!

halfshellvenus April 23 2014, 06:35:47 UTC

I liked the sensualness of this, too. So much was implied and evoked, but not directly told.

abstruse_fangrl April 23 2014, 07:59:12 UTC

Loved. This. All sorts of feels happening after reading this.

Ahh how I miss writing poetry...