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fourteencandles July 7 2008, 20:45:40 UTC
Sorry, I got my comments mixed up! The other was meant for the comment below. Thanks for reading!

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dancinbutterfly July 7 2008, 12:20:55 UTC
I joygasmed. I cant even tell you. I will write you a huge, wordy insane review tomorrow when I've slept. Cause I havent since we spoke, you know. I had to finish my fic and then read this MASTERPIECE. It is seriously my favorite thing of yours ever. It's better than anything I could've imagined. Thank you. So so much.

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fourteencandles July 7 2008, 20:46:06 UTC
You know, I think maybe use of the word "joygasm" is reward enough for me! :) I'm glad you liked it, and I hope it was close to what you wanted. It's so fun to play in the fake world!

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ms_soma July 7 2008, 13:57:46 UTC
I'm with dancinbutterfly with this - wordy review tomorrow after I've had sleep. This was seriously brilliant stuff and the 'awwww' and the 'ouch' made me happy and sad, and it makes me want to crawl into bed next to my own girl (who I've neglected tonight in favour of reading this!) and make sure that everything's okay in our world, cos it made me feel awful when things weren't right with E and V. More review tomorrow, promise!

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fourteencandles July 7 2008, 20:46:43 UTC
Yay! I'm so glad you liked it. And yeah, I felt bad and shaky for E/V too for a while there -- so I'm glad that came through. Hurrah entourage fest!!

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vic_ramsey July 7 2008, 21:18:48 UTC
While I'm firmly entrenched in bandom, I always look forward to your Entourage stories because I know they'll be fantastic. This one was no exception. I loved the slow build up of their sexual relationship. I loved that you didn't make it just Eric's fault that they broke up. I especially loved the ending because it felt real and was entirely lovely. Thanks so much for sharing this story!

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fourteencandles July 7 2008, 21:24:55 UTC
Aw, thanks. I'm glad you liked it, and that the ending worked -- I fought it forever. :)

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mistress_tien July 7 2008, 23:26:54 UTC
I just love how you get these two boys together. And, I love that their mothers knew.

Honestly, this time around it was like a real relationship--how difficult it is when each has too many things going on in their lives.

Thanks for getting them together ;-)

And, thanks very much for sharing.

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fourteencandles July 8 2008, 05:42:49 UTC
Yay, I'm glad you liked it! And... yeah, I think their "big" lives would only mean they'd have the same couple problems everyone faces, except... you know, bigger. :)

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