FIC: Get It Together, Entourage, Vince/Eric, Part 2/2

[fourteencandles]

Totally unthrilling notes ahead of Part 1.

Comments

[dancinbutterfly]

OH THANK GOD! When Vince started talking to Margot about getting over E I started to get nervous and thought it would end like Banky and Holden in Chasing Amy only not QUITE so ugly and then I would have had to die. I really would like to see how long they can get by in the closet. BTW, they need to send Ted The Bartender flowers. And maybe a rentboy.

BTW? Your Ari voice is amazing. And the little details? Like the one line about Vince's dad? Just sublime.

[fourteencandles]

Yay! Thanks for reading, I'm so glad you liked it. Flowers at the least. And Ari is just a blast to write -- I always want to put more of him in, but it's hard because he takes over the scenes.

I'm a sucker for the happy ending. And I have an answer to that closet question -- there's a next part to this, because I can't seem to leave these guys alone. But it's crazy long and will take a while to get fixed up, beta read, all of that.

[dancinbutterfly]

Need a beta? or delta? or a gamma? i can be any letter in the greek alpha bet if you need help and it gets this out!

[fourteencandles]

Hee! My own Greek alphabet on demand, that's excellent! Actually, I have someone looking at it now, but it's in the 35,000 word area, so that's where the delay comes in (also, you know, real life, etc.). But I'll keep you in mind for the future -- there's always more Vince/E to be finished! :)

[oanja]

*is dead*
These sort of fics are the reason I keep on reading slash, because this story made my heart do the fluttering thing more than once.

I haven't read anything this good in a long while. Thank you so much.

Just seeing a Vince/Eric fic made me happy but after reading this it's an understatement.

The way you wrote their relationship is just as I imagine then being, they were all so in character.

Can't think of more things to say except I hope you'll write many more Vince/eric stories.

[fourteencandles]

Seeing Vince/Eric (or writing it) makes me happy, too! I'm so glad you enjoyed this, and thanks for the kind comments.

I have a few more V/E stories in the pipeline. It's encouraging to see people are still reading in Entourage -- sometimes it seems a little quiet over here!

[oanja]

I'm so happy to hear you plan on writing more!

I know and I don't understand that. I'm my mind everyone should be involved in this fandom, they are so obviously made for each other... xD (and now I'll leave you alone before I freak you out with my fangirly attitude)

[fourteencandles]

I'm my mind everyone should be involved in this fandom, they are so obviously made for each other

Hee! No, I totally agree. It's so obvious, and there's so much fun material to work with. Where is everyone?

[shoequeeny]

Have just read both fics together because I somehow missed the it the first time it came around and WOW. These were fantastic and utterly absorbing! Thank you so much for writing!

[fourteencandles]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

Using this icon for the Eric, not the WTF. : )

[pixelarious]

Ooh, this was wonderful. Just the thing for a lazy Sunday morning. V/E are one of the best conventional couples on tv, and I LOVE the idea of them keeping it secret but each needing more. I will admit the timeline confused me a little (didn't you say it was post-s2? but wasn't MGA later in the show than that?), but minor quibbles. Beautiful job, just beautiful.

Re: Using this icon for the Eric, not the WTF. : )

[fourteencandles]

Ah, it's post season 6 or 7, somewhere in the future, but I think there are only specific spoilers through Season 2 (that Ari was once fired, that kind of thing). That is confusing, I'll try and fix that in the header.

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it (and it is a good Eric icon!).

[burntcopper]

on the one hand : Oh, BOYS. On the other, excuse me while I smack them and Hollywood around the head.

What do you mean, you restrict your Ari for fear that he'll take over? It's what he's *for*. There can never be enough gold in your life.

[fourteencandles]

Yeah, everybody needs a smackdown here, that's probably true.

Re: gold. Hee! Oh, I love Ari, but he just dominates any scene he's in. I swear, he'd be shouting insults on technique while Vince and Eric were making out if he was in every scene.

[iamnotnormal]

*I swear, he'd be shouting insults on technique while Vince and Eric were making out if he was in every scene.*

^^ This scene will now be permanently implanted into my head. I was laughing so hard I was crying because it's so true.