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fourfreedoms

Fic: The Fortress of a High Mind, 1/2

Oct 27, 2008 04:58

Title: The Fortress of a High Mind
Author: dark_reaction
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Word Count: 12,384
Rating: Hard R
Summary: Jensen and Jared are seniors at an elite private boarding school, competing for the same girl, and they can't stand each other.
acknowledgements: Thank you so much to balefully who put up with my pestering all day long just so that this could posted ( Read more... )

fic, jared/jensen, boarding school au, first time, slash

Comments 11

xtinethepirate October 27 2008, 19:57:29 UTC

Jared told the class that it was clear that Dickens had been paid by the word, and Jensen nearly leapt across the classroom, fists raised.

Totally with Jared on this one, because IT IS SO TRUE. Hate Dickens, argh.

Will comment more/better in next section. ;)

fourfreedoms October 27 2008, 20:05:50 UTC

I love Dickens, but I understand your hatred.

xtinethepirate October 27 2008, 20:25:18 UTC

Lol, as I was writing that comment, I wondered if you sided with Jensen. :) It's actually interesting that you enjoy him, to me, given the economy with which you write. In my own writing (when it happens) I am overly wordy, and yet I really have an issue with wordiness when I read.

Huh. Interesting.

fourfreedoms October 27 2008, 21:03:29 UTC

I think my economy might just be laziness. I do have a few fics where I go the verbose route. But more than the words, it's Dicken's tone that I love.

"Mr. Mantolini Poisoned himself for the seventh time!"

THAT CHARACTER IS PRICELESS!

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discord_harmony October 28 2008, 03:46:48 UTC

Reading! Oh hs aus you are my favorite.

Horace Green? School of Rock?

Jared told the class that it was clear that Dickens had been paid by the word, and Jensen nearly leapt across the classroom, fists raised.

Sorry Jen baby, but Jared's right...

Good start, moving on...

fourfreedoms October 28 2008, 04:11:43 UTC

You're the first person to get the reference of Horace Green!

jolinarmalkshur January 3 2009, 17:00:10 UTC

Really good first chapter, plus extra points for the hot boysex!

nocturniquette1 January 29 2009, 08:44:53 UTC

This is fantastic. Beyond the realm of pleasurable to read and just incredible. The whole scenario is realistic but never drags in pace and the characterization is dead on. I am in love with this fic!

maeve100 January 29 2009, 20:42:25 UTC

How cool is this?

I have Heart of Darkness and Scarlet Letter just here on my bookshelf and I am supposed to read 'em two for next week's lectures. Is this encouragement to do this or what!!

LOL. Nice start, and boy do I want to read on!!