Senses: Taste

[fourangers]

Title: Velvety caress of crimson Copper
Author: Fourangers
Genre: Angst, Drama.
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 4.922 words
Warnings: Angst and non-con. NaruSasu. Up to date with the latest manga chapters.
Summary: When your resolute mind is able to block the desires of your heart, there’s only one way to relieve the passion. Surround yourself to each

Comments

[akatsukuyomi7]

Beautifully written. I love how everything flowed seamlessly and how your descriptions painted a scene in my head.

(I would try to say more, but have you ever seen or read something and all you could think to describe it was 'Wow.'? That's what happened to me after I read this.)

[fourangers]

Thank you!!!!! ^^ I hope I wasn't being too overly-descriptive though. :P

.....now I'm embarrassed. XD *sheepish smile*

[pervert_bitch]

Wow, just that for reaction. Wow.
It also makes me wonder what will the rest think/do after they see what happened :/
BTW: "A tear sliding the Sasuke’s cheek." I think the "the" has no place there :P

[fourangers]

I'm glad you liked it.
That was why I didn't bother to think the aftermath. >_< (I also don't know)

Whoops. *fixes* Thank you! :D

[izzyisozaki]

That was quite amazing, I haven't been so drawn into a sex scene in a while. Makes me feel my Naru(seme)Sasu inclinations; even if I find it slightly OOC, for some reason it's hot as hell. The story was something a bit different for once too. The possessivity was a good theme even if slightly overboard, but after all it's not like it doesn't make sense in a really fucked up way. The descriptive detail wasn't bad. And once again, the sex part was built up perfectly. Maybe it's the lastest chapter effect, dunno, but nice job. I think Sasuke would forgive Naruto, but that tear was very effective. All the beta stuff I'll send by PM. kiz kiz

[fourangers]

Well, NaruSasu is Kishi's OTP, not SasuNaru, too bad. :/ XD

Slight OOC? XD A lot, you meant. Rape is not done by anyone sane, so I had to exaggerate Naruto's possessiveness just to show how wrong this is.

Yah.....for me it was also the latest chapter effect, before 485, I mean. Things were getting very downward south, I'm happy with the positive turn of events. :/ Which made my fic completely out of place too. XD I'm glad.

I don't know if Sasuke will be able to forgive Naruto, but I'm sure that Naruto will never forgive himself. This is one of the many: "I don't want to think about it" scenarios for me.

Thank you! *hurrs* Now, onto writing comedy. :D And you'll betaread to me (muahahahahaha)

[ookami_ryuu]

“Naruto. Stop with this paranoia, we’ve captured Sasuke at last.”

“Got him back.” Corrected Naruto.

Ah Naruto how lovely you are XD

At the back of his mind, Naruto could also blame himself. For not being strong enough to defeat Sasuke years ago, in their ancient skirmish beneath roaring waterfalls.

Oh this sounds so nice *nodnod*

Argh angst!

[fourangers]

Ah Naruto how lovely you are XD

Oh Naruto, how demented you are in this fic. *sniff*

Oh this sounds so nice *nodnod*

Because I also thinks he really blames himself for it in the manga. :/

Argh angst! Aaaangst... And rape >.> Uhmmm....

I hope you were expecting for it.....since I warned before. >_>

Damnit now I have to go off and read fluff or something, you're having me depressed. ):

Didn't remember if you prefer me to comment here on LJ or leave a review on FF.net ;P

I promise I'll write a fluffy fic for you later. *hurrs*

Livejournal. It's easier to reply to you. :3 (and have more options too!)

[ookami_ryuu]

in their ancient skirmish beneath roaring waterfalls.

I meant this part sounded nice XD

I hope you were expecting for it.....since I warned before. >_>

Well yes! But still! D:

I promise I'll write a fluffy fic for you later. *hurrs*

Livejournal. It's easier to reply to you. :3 (and have more options too!)

Yaaay! :D Fluff! XD Must be my fave-genre hahaha. *hurrhurrhurr*

I agree that it's easier to reply on LJ ^^

[xsindy]

a scenario like this is like an icing on the cake for sasuke

brother kills family->gives up everyone(naruto, konoha) for strength->kills itachi->finds out that everything is a lie->gets caught by those that were behind everything -> the only person that ever thought of him as Sasuke, not uchina, or anything else, rapes him -> break down

I like your writing style, keep up the good work :)

[fourangers]

Thank God I'm 100% sure it won't happen. D: Sasuke may not be my favorite character, but he doesn't deserves this.

Awww...thanks! :D