Senses: Hear II

[fourangers]

Title: Call me close to Home
Author: Fourangers
Genre: Comedy. College AU.
Rating: NC-17, SasuNaru
Word Count: 10.409....wth...-_-
Warnings: Huh…if the rating is NC-17…what do you think this fic will contain inside…///// It’s…lime, I guess. Masturbation, dirty language, toys and phone sex.
Summary: When your resolute mind is able to block the desires of

Comments

[arilyn9]

Oh, oh this was just fantastic! Incredibly hot and funny and so them. Just, perfect. My only complaint is that it ended too soon! Thank you for writing and sharing ♥ I will be waiting for the other senses ^^

[fourangers]

XD Thanks! Oh, c'mon, it's a >10.000 words of one-shot. XD My face was bursting flames while I was writing the lime, so...kinda wanted to finish (as quick as possible) :P

Oh, actually, this is already the 4th sense that I've written, I already wrote Touch, Sight and Smell. :P The last sense will be taste. (and maybe one more! XD)

Thank you again! <3 (and who is the old man in your avatar?)

[mykonos2]

Is that 'our' Naruto on the pic...? O.o

[fourangers]

It is....hawt, isn't it? (drooling)

The original pic is here:

http://pics.livejournal.com/fourangers/pic/00035thh

It's from a NaruGaa website.

[mykonos2]

Wow...this is so good,I absolutely loved it...Definitely adding this to my favourites...

[fourangers]

I'm glad that you liked it! :D

(I'm glad that you didn't kill me for dragging the plot too much :P)

[mykonos2]

Hahaha...no,why would I... XD And besides, it's neccessary- the 'plot' I mean- and it's a part of the story, so I wasn't bothered by that at all...and it was interesting (to me at least). I hope there will be more... there will be more, right...? *curious glance* Oh dear,what a nice pic you have there...XD

[fourangers]

Yeah, well...it's more because I sat in front of PC and I thought: "Today, I'm going to write a PWP! As plotless as possible!" and in the end it became a huge story....XD

You mean, more as continuation? No, sadly this is a one-shot. I did write other senses though, if you want to read, roam inside my (extremely) rarely updated journal.

I say, if Naruto keeps bending like that, making cute faces and removing his shirt, I'll start raping him in no time...XD

[ramenlass]

snorts in amusement

[fourangers]

*quirks an eyebrow*

I take you...liked it? XD

[ramenlass]

sure did =)

[theablackthorn]

I loved this darlin' such a great response to fidning out and a delicious smexy scene too :)

[fourangers]

Thanks! :D XD

Lol, it increases the irony to find out like that. Hopefully nobody passed through this problem in RL though. :P

[ookami_ryuu]

I love the way you write. *hurrs you*
I’m not good at ‘reviews’ but I can do random comments? ^^
I like the way you describe how they meet in that chatroom ranting about Oro, and how they interact writing to each other. How they go from banter and just a ‘hey’ from Sasuke turn the conversation serious.

It sounds strange saying this…but could you pass me your cellphone number? I wanted to talk about this.
and
Shortly after, his cellphone rang, cutting through the stagnant silence in his room. His blue eyes stared expectantly towards the unknown number and he opened the case, murmuring:

“Eh…teme?”
Made me clap my hands in happiness! XD

“When she crouched down to pick her papers, the view was so awesome. Her ass was so perky followed with that sexy legs and I swear I saw a peek of her lacy panties! God…I’m so glad that I was born a man.”I can so picture Naruto talking like that to Sasuke. *laugh

[fourangers]

Hello Dragonwolfie! :3

No problem, your review was really cool and nice! I appreciate it immensely! XD

How they go from banter and just a ‘hey’ from Sasuke turn the conversation serious.

That's also the most fascinating part of their relationship. They don't narrow their bonds with a single thing. Naruto can joke around with Sasuke but also confide between anything. So cuuuuteeee....XD

And I absolutely love that they both have crushes on each other without knowing it. XDXD
Their telephone interaction is so funny and great and adorable. XD

Thank you! It was pretty tricky to write this, especially because I didn't want them to betray each other. Because technically, they were "betraying" by having phone sex, but I wanted to validate this "betrayal" by making that deep inside they already knew each other identity. But I also didn't want to make it too crude and less subtle.

This made me laugh so much, so Naruto somehow. XDMost people forgot that he also likes women, going straight to "I like Sasuke even though somehow I'm straight

[ookami_ryuu]

That's also the most fascinating part of their relationship. They don't narrow their bonds with a single thing. Naruto can joke around with Sasuke but also confide between anything. So cuuuuteeee....XD

Ah I know! *sparkly eyes*

Thank you! It was pretty tricky to write this, especially because I didn't want them to betray each other. Because technically, they were "betraying" by having phone sex, but I wanted to validate this "betrayal" by making that deep inside they already knew each other identity. But I also didn't want to make it too crude and less subtle.

I think you did it very well and it came forth in the story just as you just said it. It was obvious that they knew on some level but not completely conciously.

Most people forgot that he also likes women, going straight to "I like Sasuke even though somehow I'm straight" shit. >_>

I know! And that's so weird because he obviously likes women. XD (I mean how can you not like them? >.> *snicker*) So I really like when he's written as bisexual. ^^ That seems most right.

Oh, I