魂の仲間

Sep 23, 2012 11:47

Title: 魂の仲間
Rating: T
Genre: Romance, Historical, Drama
Summary: Mountains and rivers are immutable, only human minds constantly change over the course of time. However, between the two of them there would always be one steady truth. Written to neo_sasunaru exchange Summer 2012.
Beta: belledragon

魂の仲間 )

fanfic, oneshot, sasunaru

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dirtygirl42 September 23 2012, 17:06:10 UTC
This was absolutely wonderful! I really enjoyed this alternate universe. And I really loved the relationship that developed between the 2 young men. Excellent excellent work!

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ookami_ryuu October 7 2012, 17:43:48 UTC
*stumbles a bit with the words* The whole first part up to the first meeting... your language there... Has I read you write to poetically before? I can't remember but I blew my mind just a little *smile*

He was so fun! His vassal wasn't tied down by boorish rules or etiquette, didn't fully comprehend the obligation to respect higher ups. He spoke when he wanted; his words weren't hindered by any excess of flourish. He acted without any restraint, his emotions, sadness, elation, frustration, impishness, were stamped all over his face, he didn't even bother to tone it down as general courtesy demanded.
- XDXD Naruto IS fun, but to hear that from Sasuke haha...

He could not forget the sensation of slashing skin and perforating a body; shrill screams echoing pain and haunting his nightmares; his utopia now marred by harsh gears of reality and grime. Blood splattered from the enemies he cut through, the squishy feeling of organs ripping and falling apart with the stench of death and sorrow, encompassing the decay of a precious feeling ( ... )

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ookami_ryuu October 7 2012, 17:44:05 UTC

Maybe for this reason he was unable to feel any affection towards his own offspring, even if his logical side insisted that he was part of his kin and blood.
- And so he's gone full circle by doing the same thing to his son as his father did to him...

On the day they gathered for departure, his lover saw him with one lifted eyebrow, chuckling and shaking his head in exasperated amusement, perfectly expressing his opinion about his stubborn decision. He, however, glared in an attempt to silence that obnoxious mouth.
- *snickers*

He dropped to his knees and gripped his hand tightly, muttering. "No...no no no no, you don't have to say sorry, why do you always have to say what I should have said instead why are you saying those things just wait...okay?" He pleaded in a thin voice. "Please wait, just for a while longer, I'll find a way, I'll heal you─"
- Sasuke asking, talking like this is so touching and feels so true somehow.

He kept recalling the sensation of his hair, the texture of his skin, the temperature of his body, the sound ( ... )

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