Nostalgic Epiphany - Part III

[fourangers]

Title: Nostalgic Epiphany
Author: Fourangers
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Adventure, Romance
Wordcount: 25.767 words >_> *guilty face*
Summary: Sasuke is Naruto's ANBU teacher and bodyguard. As Naruto is close to become a fully fledged ANBU, both are forced to face this inevitable future, their fears and their own feelings. Ninjaverse, AR. SasuNaru.
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Comments

[sarusarunomi]

I was reading this one and....I liked it, but I felt confused.
I never knew where the characters were or what they were.
I mean were they students or were they jounin or what?
Is it a fortress or some kind of castle or something?
It was kinda confusing in some parts.
Kinda ruined my immersion.

[fourangers]

Lol, I was looking for your review until I realized that this fic was so long that it was divided in 3 and I was looking for the 2nd part...anyways.

Yeah, action scenes are more confusing to picture...I didn't want to be too descriptive because it won't make the narrative fast paced, and I guess I didn't describe enough and made you confused, sorry.

They are ANBU trainees, ANBU students in which Sasuke (which is already an full fledged ANBU) was teaching and testing their abilities.

Both times they were in a fortress, which is a country border between Lightning and Frost country.

Sorry...I hope that those explanations will help you being enlightened in regards those confusing parts.