Renewing Changes - Report 15 - Part II

May 23, 2012 15:40

Title: Renewing Changes
Author: Fourangers
Rating: M
Genre: Romance, Comedy
Wordcount: 17.505 words
Summary: "Oh crap." Muttered the blond. Sometimes, there's something worse than one-night stands. It's called we're-doing-this-because-we're-going-to-die-tomorrow desperate sex. Too bad they didn't in the end. NaruSasu.
*happy grin* After two years and a ( Read more... )

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ookami_ryuu May 23 2012, 15:22:05 UTC
For some reason he harbored some vain hope that…after all the trials and tribulations just to get here; his confrontation with his brother and his father, bowing down to Sarutobi and meeting the blonde's father, at least here…Naruto would give him a break. Sasuke snorted humorlessly, guess life didn't exactly work like that.
- *small smile* Nah... things usually aren't that easy.

Sasuke still had to clear things up with Naruto, as he had promised to Jiraiya. However, there was the possibility that even after explaining everything, Naruto would reject him. And Sasuke would leave him alone, let Naruto escape from his grasp and lead a life without him.

This mere thought was enough to heighten the desire to bury himself under the bed covers, forever denying the cruel passage of time.
- Haha poor Sas.

Sasuke stood up, his gaze gradually gathering strength and his posture recomposing to his usual proud and refined self, now resembling the Uchiha that would deal head-on with his problems without much fear and was ready to face all ( ... )

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ookami_ryuu May 23 2012, 15:22:15 UTC

"God! Whenever I'm with you disasters just keep cropping up! I swear the first thing I'll do once this is over is to go to every church and temple existent in this world to exorcise you from my life!" Naruto growled, messing his hair with his hands in frustration.
- *laugh* Good luck with that XD

Sasuke's smirk widened even further as he stepped closer to the blond. To Naruto, the Uchiha looked like one of those cliché types of villains that would cackle evilly while inflicting pain to the poor protagonist. And they were also currently in a cliché situation, the snow outside, all alone far away from civilization while he prepared to commit a crime on the victim that was still oblivious about his looming disaster-

"Oh my God, are you going to murder me now?" Naruto pointed at the brunet, with a horrified expression stamped all over his face.
- *laugh* Oh Naruto you idiot XDXD

They still had a considerable distance between each other, both undecided to make any move. However all the remaining barriers were disintegrating until all ( ... )

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vernajast August 14 2012, 08:03:08 UTC
I'd like to add that, in addition to the review I'm about to write, I agree with everything written above. It was a perfect ending, leaving just the right amount to the imagination. A superfluous sex scene would have cheapened the moment. I like it!

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syrraki May 23 2012, 20:38:43 UTC
awww, I'm so glad you finished this. it's quite a unique story!
in the future drabbles, i'd love to see itachi meeting naruto!
oh oh, and i really liked the way you wrote Mikoto and Fugaku. :)

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fourangers May 27 2012, 13:05:27 UTC
Master thesis and neo_sn exchange surely hindered updating the last chapter, unfortunately. But well, now I have finished.

Yep, I'm going to make Itachi meeting Naruto.

Thanks! I'm glad you liked my portrayal about Mikoto and Fugaku. I had always felt that it's better to parents as people who wants their best to their children but have miscommunication here and there, lol.

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sarusarunomi May 24 2012, 02:36:29 UTC
All I can say is: MAOR!

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fourangers May 27 2012, 13:03:00 UTC
.....um, thanks? XD

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natbat2314 May 24 2012, 08:28:44 UTC
When I saw that you have updated, I was cheering and spinning around in my chair and then I had to hide myself because people were staring -.-
I love this story, it's beautifully written and I am a bit sad that it's finished now but, it needs to end at some point.
So well done! *hands over the cookie jar*

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fourangers May 27 2012, 13:02:46 UTC
Hahahaha, I understand you. I also squealed and giggled whenever I see an update from a fic I like.

Yes, everything has a beginning and an end. :P But I'll write drabbles about this Universe, so don't worry about it! (actually, I wrote one already, it's in my lj. :P)

*munchies cookies*

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