Renewing Changes - Report 10 (part II)

[fourangers]

Title: Renewing Changes
Author: Fourangers
Rating: M
Genre: Romance, Comedy
Wordcount: 12.000 words. What the fucking crap. O_O
Summary: "Oh crap." Muttered the blond. Sometimes, there's something worse than one-night stands. It's called we're-doing-this-because-we're-going-to-die-tomorrow desperate sex. Too bad they

Comments

I HATE HTML.

[ali_scheggiate]

This chapter sure is long :D Thankyouthankyouthankyou, LOL.

Soushotai is interesting. I clicked on the link you left in the AN and it's not a wonder chinese people can't read it, cursive script looks really different from the other. But it's beautiful to look at <3

Re: I HATE HTML.

[fourangers]

I saw your old comment...XD Let's just say that I hate html too. :P

Thank my beta, she was überly busy but she still found some time to proofread this chapter. The worst part was that in the 6th chapter I said to her: "ok! After this gigantic thing, I'm sure that most of the chapters will be kinda 6000 long." And she was like: "Ok." And that day I was like: "So...........*head scratching* 12.470 words."

Soushotai is the most difficult style in Chinese Calligraphy too. It's really difficult to explain, you have to be free but you also have a good control with this freedom. Though if you ever have the opportunity to learn Chinese Calligraphy, I'll just say that it's worthwhile this experience.

I love Dorky!Naru...dunno why. I believe that both of them must suck in flirtation. Naruto trying too hard and failing, Sasuke barely trying and failing. ROTFLMAO. Sasuke is probably amused by Naruto's lame flirting.

Sasuke's rage at Naruto's planned itinerary is right and proper.What are you talking about? Gundam stores and temple of penises

[ookami_ryuu]

Wow, but this curved line is really impressive! I wonder if I can use this idea for my next project…"

Sasuke rolled his eyes. "Do you really have to relate everything to architecture? Didn't know you were such an architect geek."
- *snicker* It's just a sort of job-damage XDXD I have it too *chuckle* I think everyone who workes with something they love suffer from this. *lopsided grin*

Naruto harrumphed. "It's not my fault, it's a conditioned reflex. We architects are obsessed with forms and shapes, using them as inspiration to create new ideas." He crouched to observe better the lines when he met one uncomfortable pause coming from the brunet. "Something wrong?"

Sasuke fixed his eyes to the ground in a pensive state, when he mumbled almost inaudibly. "Must be nice. Loving your job so much that you see it everywhere you go."- Okay this is one of the creepy things with writing commentary at the same time as you're reading the fic; because suddenly they say pretty much the same thing you just wrote! XDXD

[ookami_ryuu]

With a bewildered blink, the blond obeyed and hastened his steps, though he didn't see the victorious smirk Sasuke threw towards the disappointed look from the salesperson.
- Okay so I totally have a thing for Possessive!Sasuke XDXD So naturally I found this all adorable haha.

With a sour look, Naruto grabbed the food from the brunet, and divided it into three pieces, offering some to a nearby deer. This piqued the attention of most deer in the vicinity, as they approached to eat more from the blonde's hand. Mildly entertained by this event, Naruto tentatively touched their horns (that were cut by the government to prevent any accident) as the animals didn't appear to mind this interaction.
- I'm like this too XDXD Totally got caught up with feeding birds when I was in Italy some years ago haha.

"…nothing bad really happened just now right?" Naruto shyly asked, scratching the back of his head

[ladyshewolf]

I'm so in love with this story, y'know?
What I love even more is that I'm currently living near Osaka, so I know everywhere you've mentioned. Usually, when fics are set in America I have no idea because I'm Australian, but I can actually relate to this!! haha
Can't wait to read the rest of the story~!

[fourangers]

Sorry for taking so long to answer your review...;_____;

Anyways, thanks! I have already updated the last chapter, so whenever you have the time, check it out!

Ah, I totally get you, it feels good reading a place and you're like: "I know which one you're talking about!" right? XD I also get lost whenever they use an America setting, I have zero of geographic knowledge over that country, lol. I hope you're having a good time there in Osaka!

Thank you once again!

[vernajast]

I giggled through it, but at the end, I got pretty sad. Poor Naruto. I'm proud of him for sticking with it, but it's hard to watch Sasuke continue rejecting him, even though I'm sure he'll come to his senses. It must stuck to constantly need to worry over being discovered. :/