"Supplementary Falsehoods to a First Impression" for laundrylove

Aug 22, 2008 10:21

Title: Supplementary Falsehoods to a First Impression
Gift for: laundrylove
Author: peskywhistpaw
Pairing: Godric/Rowena
Rating: PG
Warnings: None, I believe.
Genres: Humor, and budding romance
Author's Notes: I hope you enjoy this, laundrylove! I am very much fond of romantic humor, myself, and it was a pleasure to write this for you. :) Thank you to V for the beta.
Summary: Godric ( Read more... )

author: peskywhistpaw, character: godric gryffindor, .summer 2008, genre: romance, rating: pg, genre: humor, *fic, character: rowena ravenclaw, ship: godric/rowena

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laundrylove August 22 2008, 19:55:45 UTC
Yes! This was just incredible.

You've got such a good grasp on Rowena- all of her unnecessary words, her thinking processes, everything. It's just how I imagined her. And Godric was wonderful; his first glimpse of Rowena, running her into a haystack (ROFL, now that's humor), and taking a walk with her. Loved all of it.

Additionally, it was plain that he had no sense of boundaries.

*snicker* That made me crack up so hard.

…for she seemed the sort to dance about her main point with excessive shouting.

TOTALLY. Godric's spot on there.

I'll refrain from quoting any more of your own fic at you. ;) Suffice to say, I loved it! Thank you!

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chimbomba August 23 2008, 00:33:58 UTC
There are just SO many lines I love in here, though my favorites (after some consideration) are:

“Some find me very loveable,” he insisted.

She nearly choked. He was looking positively jolly now. “Your mother, perhaps,” she covered quickly, “and those in possession of minimal wit.”

That whole banter is just lovely, actually.

And, possibly my most favorite line,

Godric churned over her words slowly in his mind, weeding out the unnecessary ones until he realized that she had consecutively introduced herself and apologized.

I just absolutely love your characterizations. Especially Rowena, how you've given her many layers. :D

♥ ♥ Bravo, m'dear!

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holyfant August 24 2008, 18:26:57 UTC
Oh, yessssss. So spot on, for both of them. I love how layered they are and the theme of "first impressions" - wonderful. I really enjoyed the pacing of this fic; especially the banter is sharp and witty and delightfully up-tempo.

Wonderful, wonderful fic!

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