just a silly poem...

[fotosax]

I wrote this the other day at Starbucks, after I was done writing the four pages about my 8th session with Jack... this is what came out

Comments

[cmhkorn]

loves it!!!!!

"enjoying the blue and red sunspots floating just behind my eyelids"
that line hi something unreal.... maybe a spot floating behind my eyelid.

[fotosax]

crazy part is ... i was sober.

[mindquakes]

molecular thoughts! sooo good. i enjoyed this...thoroughly.

[fotosax]

aww, thank you. i'm glad. maybe i'll try writing more poetry, then... if I have your approval, I feel like there's hope for me yet :-D