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Bonus Content Fic: Christmas After the Closed Ward

Aug 10, 2015 19:11

Title: Christmas After the Closed Ward
Username: ncp
Pairing: None
Type: Gen
Prompt #: Own prompt
Rating: R
Word Count: 1154
Warnings/content: brief masturbation? it’s not even remotely sexy
Summary: Harry wasn’t the only one with anger issues during his Fifth year. After running into his friends at St. Mungo’s on Christmas Day, Neville needs to ( Read more... )

!round: 3-neville, fanwork: fic, character: neville longbottom, type: gen, rating: r, by: ncp, !bonus content

Comments 3

amorette August 11 2015, 02:58:46 UTC

Aaaawwwww!!! This was so so good! Omg I am so impressed with how amazingly you got into Neville's head and made it sound like HIM. His worries and emotions and thoughts all felt so him, I really enjoyed this.

nia_kantorka August 15 2015, 12:00:46 UTC

God, the poor thing. Wanted to hug him very badly (even though it's a bad idea with someone in such a state of mind). I can see the whole scene before my eyes in colours. Brillant job! Thank you!

articcat621 August 16 2015, 01:35:43 UTC

Awh, this just tore at my heartstrings. This was so Neville though. You did a wonderful job at capturing all the angst and frustration he must feel. Neville's one of those characters I wish we saw more of, and you did a wonderful job of giving me a peek of him in his home life. xx