Fic: Star Crossed

[shy_of_reality]

Title: Star Crossed
Username: lrthunder
Pairing: Narcissa/Muggle Male (his identity will be revealed in the story)
Type: Het
Prompt #: 16
Rating: R (closer to PG-13, but just to be safe)
Word Count: 2755
Warnings/content: slight sexual content, implied sex
Summary: Narcissa spends the summer at her aunt's house. During the summer, she meets and falls in

Comments

[sirmioneforever]

This is a great little fic. It's good to see a different side of both Narcissa, and Vernon as well. As soon as I read his name I knew who it was and became intrigued about how it would work out.

You didn't disappoint me at all. I can see Vernon pushing Narcissa away for something that he's not able to comprehend properly, and it explains his behaviour towards the Potter's. I loved them seeing each other on the platform at the end, and Narcissa mentioning that she nearly made the biggest mistake of her life. If they had stayed together then I could see the same situation between Snape's parents happening.

[lrthunder]

Thank you. I always wondered if Vernon had had an encounter with magic before marrying Petunia. If he had never met the Potters (by the time PS/SS starts), how would he know what they were, especially if Petunia didn't like to talk about them?

[savvyshka]

This was a very thought-provoking tale. It was interesting how instantly Vernon changed after he saw Narcissa performing magic. You managed to keep him very in character.

I loved you Narcissa.

Lovely work. Thank you for sharing.

[lrthunder]

Thanks!