Fic: A Kaleidoscopic Unity by asentia

[shy_of_reality]

Title: A Kaleidoscopic Unity
Username: asentia
Pairing: Neville/Pansy
Type: Het
Prompt: #76 - Pansy, as a professor and the new head of Slytherin, is determined to wrest her house out of its ignominy and restore its former greatness. Part of that involves making nice with Neville Longbottom, the new (handsome?!) head of Gryffindor and Herbology professor

Comments

[shy_of_reality]

Oh that dashing Mr. Longbottom. I like how you literally created a kaleidoscope in the bits and pieces of your story. It was a really interesting read and I'm 100% Pansy & Neville practice house "unity" every night ;)

[nutmeg_44]

This is awesome! I love that Pansy decided to step up and make a change. I liked seeing Neville confident but unsure. I like seeing him ask for advice about how to understand Pansy. The vulnerability of Pansy dealing with her Theo breakup and occasionally being tempted to slip up and contact him was nice and natural. The glimpse of the student's relationships was a nice B-story. It was fun to see the interhouse dynamics there.

I really enjoyed this story.

To House Unity! LOL

[ama_dare]

This is a great story, I enjoyed reading it a lot!
The own characters that you wove into your story a really lovely. For me, they show how Hogwarts could have been, had there not been the threat of Voldemort looming over the trios head. The easiness, the happiness, the heartbreak. It felt like they kinda took over your fic and I wouldn't mind reading more about them!
I really enjoyed Pansy's voice in this, her past with Theo, her insecurities and on the same time how confident she can be.