Fic: Golden Dreams by liliths_requiem

Aug 07, 2013 21:00

Title: Golden Dreams
Username: liliths_requiem
Pairing: Pansy/Padma
Type: Femslash
Prompt: #59 - Through the Looking Glass by Lewis Carroll
Rating: R
Word Count:2,590
Warnings/content: graphic lesbian sex, some language
Summary: Padma and Pansy fall in love in pieces and fragments.
Notes:I tried to keep with the prompt. Hopefully I succeeded. Thanks to J for beta ( Read more... )

pairing: pansy&padma, rating: r, by: liliths_requiem, character: padma patil, !round: 1-pansy, character: pansy parkinson, type: femslash

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shy_of_reality August 8 2013, 04:04:05 UTC
This isn't really my type of story, but nevertheless, I did enjoy it. I liked the way you showed their relationship over the years and how complex it got. Good job!

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nathalieweasley August 8 2013, 06:04:35 UTC
I loved this fic. I love how Padma and Pansy always had this connection but Issues got in the way. The way you describe them is beautiful and each moment felt so significant and poignant. Really beautiful. ♥

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gamma_x_orionis August 8 2013, 15:41:47 UTC
Oh my god. I loved this. Like... wow, did I love this.

I liked the way you told the story in pieces, working from either end of the timeline and moving towards the middle. I liked that Pansy and Padma and Parvati were friends before Hogwarts - I've never read that before, but there's absolutely no reason why it couldn't have been so, of course. I liked the build-up of romance between Padma and Pansy during the first half of the story, and I really liked that they got a happy ending together :)

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shameful_desire August 8 2013, 18:55:22 UTC
This was beautiful. The way you told the story was exquisite. Padma’s desire was palpable throughout the entire story. I really enjoyed this.

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arjd August 17 2013, 19:59:29 UTC
This was incredible, seriously. The fragments, and the way they all came together, just the sheer beauty of the language and the way you gave them a history and a life together spanning almost twenty years... Wow. Just... amazing.

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