fanfiction; katekyo hitman reborn!

[forochel]

filling in the spaces
dino/hibari
katekyo hitman reborn!
prompt: garbage cans; picnicbird

Comments

[kasugai_gummie]

Mishy, oh Mishymishymishy!!! ;3; Dino was a perfect blend between the capable mafia boss and the playful boy inside (entangled in a garbage can and yet kicking a lid towards Hibari and--!). Hibari was suitably battle-thirsty, yet given the situation and timing of which these scenes are taking place, YESYESYES. OHMYGOD YES.

And?? You gave Romario a cameo. And mentioned Dino's family because where would he be without. Totally, adlfkjeh THERE WAS UST TOO. Not too blatant, but worded just right. The dialogue reads as if it were tailored to them all and and ::mumblemumble:: nnngh, I LOVE YOU MISHY. ♥♥

[forochel]

YAY THERE WAS UST! I was like, okay there is lots of combat, because where would they be without combat? But is there enough tension-of-the-sexual-kind? Is it even there at all?! Well I'm too sleepy to care, mweeheehee~

Romario makes me sporfle a lot, oh dear. He's all long-suffering lieutenant and has to deal with all the hijinks that his boss gets up to. ♥

algksjdf your comment makes me go mweeheehee~ and beam at the world. haato~♥

[kasugai_gummie]

::eyes cross:: ... did Mishy close her div alignment for center? XD;;

YES THERE WAS UST. The best kind is the subtle kind and you had it here in spades. I mean, the twisting of Dino's arm behind his back, but not going so far as to actually cause lasting damage. IN KYOUYA-SPEAK THAT MEANS RESPECT SOMETHING! 8D;

Romario is such a darling. ♥ I can totally see him as Dino's father figure, aaaawwww ::wibbles::

XD MWEEHEEHEE AWAY O... SOMETHING OF MINE! I-I suddenly have this overwhelming urge to adopt you. ::facepalm::

[forochel]

Mwuh? *stares at entry* I don't see anything wrong with it...

AHAHAHA IT WAS SO SUBTLE I COULDN'T DETECT IT! *WINSATLIFE!* Only because lasting damage would have denied Kyouya more fighting with Dino, and then where would he be? :3

Yeah! Especially as he was lieutenant to the Cavallone 9th as well, so he'd be well placed to train the young 10th. Dino's only, what, 19? So he couldn't have been boss for all that long. Oh my god! This fandom needs an epic Dino Learns The Details Of Mafioso Bossing fic, where Romario facedesks a lot and wonders what the hell Reborn actually taught Dino.

WELL I CAN SEE HOW "O OFFICIAL-STALKER-OF-MY-MISTRESS-MINE" CAN BE QUITE THE MOUTHFUL. Mweeheehee? Awww, I'm too bite-sized for you to resist. ♥ 8D

[molokomolotov]

I LOVE IT. SO MUCH. I. YES. I WANT MORE AMAZING FIC FROM YOU MISHY >:D

[forochel]

SO DEMANDING, MELINA! :O BUT THANK YOU. ♥

[nyw]

I wanted to buy this manga when I saw it! Obviously I did not, but now I really feel like buying it. :3

[forochel]

\:D/! I have fulfilled my purpose in life~ You can download it! From the internet! Obviously! Would you like links? :DDD

[nyw]

Yes, please!

[forochel]

WELL ACTUALLY, since you are Chinese literate, this wonderful person has all the taiwan translations scanned here. But if you truly want to own it you can go to KEFI.org, or mangatraders.com, yup.

[picnicbird]

Abso-freaking-lute adoration. You put me to shame -- okay, you put most everyone else to shame, too -- AAAAAH. I love it -- how could you do a little fic full of action and somehow make it so -- it's so introspective even when stuff happens, and that in itself is so lovely. I really thought I was going to have to wait a month or more -- THANK YOU THANK YOU. I'm so glad I pestered you to write -- it's just wonderful. And Romario -- I'm in love with Romario, so you can imagine my elation at seeing him XD -- it's so pretty. Thank you..!

[forochel]

:D! ♥! *is speechless at your comment*! ♥♥♥! (It only feels introspective, I think. There's no real substance to it, kakaka.)

[kiizu]

...hmm? says the person who's only read one and a half books and understands not.

I guess I'll see. /____\

[forochel]

^____________^ Study for your finals first, imouto-chan! still can't believe you essentially have only 25 weeks to complete one year's worth of syllabus