(for bbubbleddae) Stars

Jan 26, 2017 15:09

For: bbubbleddae

Title: Stars
Genre angst, fluff, romance, smut
Rating: NC-17
Side Pairings (if any): Past Chansoo, minor Baekyeol, mentions of Krisho
Warnings: [Click to view]Mental health problems, which makes consent… iffy. But! All sex is intended to be perceived as consensual.
Word Count: ~8k
Summary: Jongin doesn’t come from the skies, but he shines as if ( Read more... )

genre: angst, rating: nc17, length: oneshot, genre: fluff, genre: romance, day 12

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littlestcandle February 14 2017, 03:57:17 UTC
out of curiosity, who did you think it was?

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pororoporn January 27 2017, 01:23:26 UTC
I'm always wary about how stories in these kinds of environments are written. And as much as I would like to check up on the accuracy of portrayals for the conditions used in the fic, I'm honestly relieved you handled the subject matter with sensitivity. I'm also glad with how you wrote Ksoo and the unusual friendship between him and Jongin. The idea of finding someone to tolerate the rest of the world with is nicely fleshed out in this fic without going overboard or too in-the-face.

Thank you for your art! Thank you for your heart!

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teeturner101 January 28 2017, 03:00:24 UTC
Living with a relative that actually has schizophrenia, I think Jongin's character was pretty accurate. The delusions, the short moments of clarity, and the denial are things I see often. I liked how Kyungsoo's relationship with Jongin helped him with forgiving Baekhyun. It's not easy to forgive a betrayal like that but I'm glad he did. I just wish Jongin had the same opportunity to do the same with Sehun. The ending was open ended and I liked that. It gave me a feeling of hope even though I know Jongin will be a schizophrenic for the rest of his life at least he'll have Kyunsoo with him.

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gaius93 January 29 2017, 08:34:13 UTC
This was really beautiful and to be honest it didn't feel rushed at all to me the flow was very natural it felt very real and honest. I loved how kyungsoo learned to care for jongin slowly and how in the end they both helped each other learning something about forgiveness. I loved this story it's very sad and so soft I don't know how else to describe it. It's a very touching story so thank you for writing and sharing it .

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jonginspuppy January 29 2017, 12:59:20 UTC
Oh wow that was great!
I almost thought they'd do the surgery. It seems Kyungsoo was able to convince Junmyeon.
I hope Jongin will get better now he will spend more time with Kyungsoo!!

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