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jonginspuppy January 24 2017, 21:37:09 UTC
Okay wow that was great and very creative.
The last thing Kyungsoo heard was Jongin didn't want to be with him and this ending kind of scared me because what if Kyungsoo hated him!! But I believe in their love.
But really, time traveling with magic is really wow!!!

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gaius93 January 25 2017, 07:28:27 UTC
This was interesting to read a mix between magic and time travel au. It was sweet how it turned out that in the end they both had felt something was missing and had tried to search for it and the search did bring them together. It was a lovely story thank you for writing it and sharing it

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anonymous January 25 2017, 20:29:56 UTC
Aw, I really liked the ending. Bratty Sehun was a great character in this. I felt like some of the time travel specifics were difficult to follow, though that's slways the case with time travel. Ksoo's characterwas really sweet in this. Nice job.

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kori93 January 26 2017, 11:23:18 UTC
i wonder what goes on inside ur head to write this beautiful stories..i cant even write a cow essay..hahaha...great job authornim..really love the ending..히트 하트..

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akigia February 12 2017, 22:20:57 UTC
holy shoot this was really interesting? this was sorta time travel au / parallel uni au? but you somehow nailed it ahh im amazed! and yes kd felt as if they were missing out on or missing something/someone in their lives and then finally got to meet ach other ....are meant to be ;u; i was afraid they'll not meet again but im glad everything turned out alright! their moments together were very sweet an precious but the moments between jongin and his friends were precious as well, they really care for each other which was so nice. truly friendship goals ;;
thanks for writing and sharing with us! <3

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