Comments | forgottenlover: Dusty toy-box

forgottenlover

Dusty toy-box

Dec 27, 2005 05:54

Title: Dusty toy-box
Characters: Envy
Rating: Perfectly worksafe
Spoilers: Not really, no
Notes: We finally resume the saga of young Envy… perhaps one of these days I’ll make these things their own section.

( Precise steps were key )

fma, envy, oneshots

Comments 8

zrana December 27 2005, 22:05:57 UTC

I LIKE.

I don't think I've read such a great fic into the mind of one of the sins like this. *throws cookies*

forgottenlover December 28 2005, 01:31:11 UTC

::grins widely:: thank you, Envy comes and goes

merlynnod December 28 2005, 00:16:44 UTC

Ooooh, that was wonderful! I love your characterization of Envy and Dante, creepy and weird and perfect. ;)

My only quibble...wasn't Envy created by Scar's brother? Or did I just imagine that? I could have...I get drain bamaged sometimes... ;)

But, anyway, wonderful story! I love your style of writing and the seeds of Envy's future fury at Hohenheim and Ed. :)

forgottenlover December 28 2005, 01:31:48 UTC

you're thinking of Lust. Envy is far too old even if that had been the caseof things

baeckahaesten January 1 2006, 19:41:58 UTC

Apparently it's make-me-like-Envy week, hee. You write so clearly and sharply, it's very very refreshing to read and Envy's caught *bing* here. The rhythm and the hammered-in-ness of Envy's fate, if that even makes any real or grammatical sense. I read this and forgot to review a while back, because I'm hopeless like that EVEN THOUGH I REALLY LIKED IT. Damn.

forgottenlover January 2 2006, 03:44:07 UTC

::laughs softly:: Envy... well, him as someone young and... well... doomed, has been in my head from the get go. I'm glad his ruin seems most appropriate for him in the telling.

don't worry, I'll just take that to mean your brain stopped working in the meantime, in a good way.

prides_tears March 22 2006, 09:04:55 UTC

*bows down to you* LUFF

LUFF

forgottenlover March 22 2006, 11:48:13 UTC

::small smile:: glad you liked