Oh, really nice! Roy, despite breaking down a few times, isn't one to stay that way for long, especially not for a whole fanfic (or in this case, a long ass chapter). Both characters are learning something new from the other, which is helping both of them cope with the situation at hand.
Roy's really gonna need that doctor soon, though.
On a side note, like Velvet mentioned, by the end of this fic, I kinda did want them to hook up. :P However, for them to suddenly say 'I wuv u' and have them screw like bunnies is a big fanfic no-no. I mean, Maes and Roy attempting anal sex while Roy's ass is a bloody cavern of pain? O.o;;; That's just way too painful to imagine...
Either way, this was just as well written as the other chapters, although this is by far the fluffiest of the three. I can't wait to see how Greed and Kimbley get to play into the rest of the story. :D
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoy my Roy ::grins:: and yes, some of the things Roy is learning about Maes made him go 'wha??' I noticed while we were working on it.
the doctor, yes, we worked out something for that, I believe that might be the next chapter if I remember correctly
um, I don't believe they get sex before we skip characters, no, I don't know if sex is even in the cards at all... for them anyway ::coughs::
Thank you! and I noticed, these two got insanely fluffy, so terribly true...
Hughes is such a stalker. Their reactions to each others little secrets were perfect. And I have to agree with the above comments and say that by the end I was wanting them to just have sex already, but I am so glad that you did not take it in that direction and instead opted for a more realistic turn.
oh yeah, we've barrelled straight on through the realism ::coughs:: seriously though, it gets rather amusing before we veer back into "Wha? NO!" territory
"Wha? No!" territory, you say? Should be interesting. ^_^ Hm, see, I was already worried about the severe loss of blood and continuous comments on how cold Roy is. Argh.
Enlightening to get a writing lesson from you, Puppy Dawg. It definitely has been time enough for you to have picked up on this. Hope you git on it. ^.^
And yeah, this was my major foray into the world of Roy's brain. We'll be spending a ton of time there before returning to the other side of the Storyline
And, it's always a welcome pleasure to help another author out.
Ow.*flashes my sweetest grin and pets* I've already got my NekoChit so I'm afraid to me, you'll always be my puppy dawg. I guess we'll have to agree to disagree. Oh, and I was gonna say that I thought ya'll captured Kimblee's sado-masochitic side very well, especially his masochism which, while harder to identify, is definitely canon. [Specifically remembering the scene between he and Al, when Al traps he and his explosive within a stone enclosure, and he smiles as he staggers out]
She does a wonderful Kimblee, yeah, so we work with it. I keep having to tone down the in headedness, but not as much as I was worried about, so it comes otu all pretty and stuff ::grins::
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Poor Roy. I kinda want them to have sex, but I honestly don't think Roy is up to it right now.
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Roy's really gonna need that doctor soon, though.
On a side note, like Velvet mentioned, by the end of this fic, I kinda did want them to hook up. :P However, for them to suddenly say 'I wuv u' and have them screw like bunnies is a big fanfic no-no. I mean, Maes and Roy attempting anal sex while Roy's ass is a bloody cavern of pain? O.o;;; That's just way too painful to imagine...
Either way, this was just as well written as the other chapters, although this is by far the fluffiest of the three. I can't wait to see how Greed and Kimbley get to play into the rest of the story. :D
*gives you cupcakes*
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the doctor, yes, we worked out something for that, I believe that might be the next chapter if I remember correctly
um, I don't believe they get sex before we skip characters, no, I don't know if sex is even in the cards at all... for them anyway ::coughs::
Thank you! and I noticed, these two got insanely fluffy, so terribly true...
::takes, cheers, and shares with coauthor::
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Hughes is such a stalker. Their reactions to each others little secrets were perfect. And I have to agree with the above comments and say that by the end I was wanting them to just have sex already, but I am so glad that you did not take it in that direction and instead opted for a more realistic turn.
You guys win.
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And yeah, this was my major foray into the world of Roy's brain. We'll be spending a ton of time there before returning to the other side of the Storyline
And, it's always a welcome pleasure to help another author out.
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Ow.*flashes my sweetest grin and pets* I've already got my NekoChit so I'm afraid to me, you'll always be my puppy dawg. I guess we'll have to agree to disagree. Oh, and I was gonna say that I thought ya'll captured Kimblee's sado-masochitic side very well, especially his masochism which, while harder to identify, is definitely canon. [Specifically remembering the scene between he and Al, when Al traps he and his explosive within a stone enclosure, and he smiles as he staggers out]
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She does a wonderful Kimblee, yeah, so we work with it. I keep having to tone down the in headedness, but not as much as I was worried about, so it comes otu all pretty and stuff ::grins::
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