Memory

Oct 05, 2005 17:52

Memory
Pairing: Greed/Kimbley
Rating: Worksafe
Spoilers: Not that I can think of
Notes: Mwahaha! I finally write this pairing straight up and by myself!

onto the story )

greed, fma, kimbley, greed/kimbley, oneshots

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chrstphrl October 6 2005, 01:17:46 UTC
Wow. This is lovely.And I don't even like this pairing. You descriptions of the colors is so perfect.

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forgottenlover October 6 2005, 01:22:13 UTC
::grins:: magical studies put to practice ::bows:: with Greed's flair, of course. Thanky ou very much.

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empty_geas October 6 2005, 01:25:11 UTC
Very nice. I like the progression of self and knowledge for Greed, changing tastes and learning the dangers and pleasures of each. I love the end, all the dangers and colors that are wrong for him wrapped up in Kimbley and he just can't resist.

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forgottenlover October 6 2005, 01:34:53 UTC
There is irony here. Cinnamon is used for *protection*

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silver_ariane October 6 2005, 01:54:31 UTC
Very pretty. I love the color theme and the vivid descriptions you give of each color, and how they all come together in the end.

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forgottenlover October 6 2005, 02:09:01 UTC
::bows:: thank you very much, I've always been fascinated by the manings of color

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lily22 October 6 2005, 01:56:24 UTC
Ahaha you wrote it! Man, I was kind of skeptical at first, but it's lovely! :D

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forgottenlover October 6 2005, 02:09:53 UTC
Of course it's good. it's not often Greed crawls out of hiding to actually dictate a fic to me these days.

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ponderosa121 October 6 2005, 02:42:47 UTC
Ooh! The colour symbolism is damn nice, and I like all the little things that are hinted at.

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forgottenlover October 6 2005, 17:53:17 UTC
Thank you! I was hoping I got that sense of activity down properly!

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