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forgetmenot8002

What Could Never Be

Dec 12, 2011 14:13

Title: What Could Never Be
Drabble
Pairings: GD/TOP
Rating: pg-13
Summary: The lines begin to blur and Jiyong starts to lose himself.
A/N:
Constructive Criticism is welcomed and in fact encouraged XD

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fanworks: fanfiction(s)

Comments 10

atenais_pala December 13 2011, 02:58:22 UTC

Sometimes I ask myself who Jiyong is. Is G-Dragon a person or a mask?
I really liked your short fanfic. Please, write more!

Thank you.

forgetmenot8002 December 13 2011, 12:18:46 UTC

Yeah, if Jiyong and G-dragon are alike in ways or totally different. Or maybe we're just thinking too hard >.<
It makes good fodder for angst though XD

Thanks for reading!

jiyonglikesme December 13 2011, 03:07:19 UTC

complicated sigh...
but this is nice ^^

forgetmenot8002 December 13 2011, 12:19:29 UTC

Thank you ^^

b2theang December 13 2011, 18:46:02 UTC

I really enjoy these thoughtful 'snippet' fics and this is really nicely written. I like to think reality is kinder to them then our imagination (although it can also be harsher too) but exploring these emotions is touching and provoking. I like how you are able to create the feeling distictly and susinctly (if that is how it is spelt.)

forgetmenot8002 December 17 2011, 06:58:21 UTC

succinctly* (I googled it XD) And its such a relief to hear that, this all sounded very halting and awkward in my head >.<

Thank you so much for you comment ^^

b2theang December 23 2011, 22:24:59 UTC

Hi I did not forget, here is the picture of the Cheetah mask in this post and in the tumblr link in the achieve you'll find the picture of the other icon. I could not find in my computer files but it should be in that tumblr 8D. I hope that helps and I was not too late.

Take care, have a merry christmas and a great new year!

b2theang December 23 2011, 22:25:40 UTC

http://b2theang.livejournal.com/2069.html
Thats the post sorry ^^;

bumble_gum December 15 2011, 08:50:02 UTC

"It was only for a moment before sleep would suffocate him, before Jiyong woke up alone. " I especially loved this line. <3 Thank you for writing and I really look forward to more from you in future; please continue writing more! ^_^

forgetmenot8002 December 17 2011, 06:59:52 UTC

That was the sentence I wrote this fic around ^^ The fic didn't exactly turn out as planned, but I managed to keep that one sentence lol

Thank you for commenting!