Time is Running out

May 01, 2010 16:48

Time is Running out;

JongKey; R

I wanted freedom
Bound and restricted
I tried to give you up
But I'm addicted;

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His muscles spazz at the cold touch of the being in front of him, beautiful and alluring; mysterious and seductive )

rating: r, pairing: jongkey, fandom: shinee

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lovestrucksmile May 2 2010, 02:40:16 UTC
I liked this. :) Good descriptions. ♥

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forevershining May 2 2010, 03:16:07 UTC
Thank you so much.

I appreciate this comment a lot. ^^

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indelible_x May 2 2010, 03:32:54 UTC
Not gonna lie, I clicked this because of the title (i love muse so fajkfsalkfjsa much) and holy shit I am glad I did.

Your detail is lovely and the way you used the song lyrics was perfect. <3

I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing, bbycakes! :DDD

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forevershining May 2 2010, 04:11:18 UTC
ahah I enjoy the band too. ^^

no problem at all, thank you so much for reading and the comment! ♥

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sodonii_chan May 2 2010, 03:54:02 UTC
This was just. a;lskdfjds;klfjewoifj

You will be the death of me

He thinks, as he watches the being slowly move in front of him. He meets those eyes,
deep, dark, secretive and delicious, and those lips, pink, soft and moist. He finds himself
resisting, struggling, urging himself to move. He wanted more. Much more. The being
places a slender finger upon his gagged lips, and tugs the corner of its mouth as if to say

"I know"
♥♥♥

And the ending. Was just. <3.
And there was nothing in the entire world that he would
ever trade for the feeling, and the thrill, and the suspense of it all.
Jonghyun is floating happily; he knows that he never has to worry.

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forevershining May 2 2010, 04:36:38 UTC
oh, thanks so much for the keysmashing and the quoting. ^^

and I'm glad you appreciated the ending. tbh i kind of rushed it, but glad to see it's being loved.

♥~

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sodonii_chan May 2 2010, 04:57:25 UTC
Hehe how could I not keysmash and quote??

Srsly?? Lol the ending doesn't seem rushed at all. ^_^

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forevershining May 2 2010, 05:42:00 UTC
tysm bby~ ♥

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namae_nai May 2 2010, 06:23:33 UTC
Muse :D:D:D
I like that.

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forevershining May 3 2010, 02:19:47 UTC
Muse. :D:D

I like them too. ^^

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xxqod May 2 2010, 09:16:54 UTC
This is really good ^^

Vampire + bondage = <3

hehe.

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forevershining May 3 2010, 02:20:19 UTC
indeed. ^^

ㅋㅋㅋ

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