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forevershining May 2 2012, 18:51:12 UTC
spot for shippal

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shippal May 2 2012, 20:26:05 UTC
;~~~~~~~; I WILL HAVE MY SEQUEL.

inserts entire fic here

Baby kitty wrote something dirty. =u= But I love it, so that's all that matters. Fluffy BaekYeol is better than dirty BaekYeol.

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forevershining May 2 2012, 20:39:50 UTC
; ; maybe one day

And yes baby kitty wrote something dirty and hey the fact that I even wrote anything at all is like. What. idk. sob. sob. Fluffy baekyeol will come. It will.

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lucasmrtn May 2 2012, 18:57:21 UTC
Oh gosh... This was... Perfect !
I wish i could write that well :(

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forevershining May 2 2012, 19:51:43 UTC
sob it wasn't that good, more like word vomit and idk something that doesn't even have a plot, but thank you! ; ; <3

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lucasmrtn May 2 2012, 19:54:30 UTC
No really it was great !
I attempted writing angsty smut (that has to do with rape), but I really felt uncomfortable and unhappy about it so I think I'll wait a little longer for smut. I have trouble with the vocabulary too (it's harder making it sound "poetic"). But seriously, your writing is so enjoyable to read !!!!

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forevershining May 2 2012, 20:57:54 UTC
oh thank you! ; ; and yeah, it takes a while to get used to writing it, I guess. sob. I never write smut and this is probably the closest I'll ever get close to writing one, but yeah, don't force yourself if it feels uncomfortable.

Vocabulary is hard too! I have troubles with it as well and my first language is english sob.But thanks, really, that means a lot to me ; v ; and I wish you luck in more of your future writings~ if you want I could beta stuff for you. ahah. ^^

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tiggie0307 May 2 2012, 20:38:05 UTC
Perv!Baekhyun FTW He's creeping so hard in this, I love it. Absolutly love it. XD

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forevershining May 2 2012, 20:46:32 UTC
haha sob indeed, he's a creep ; v ; thank you~

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envybleedsgreen May 2 2012, 21:25:58 UTC
FUCK. THAT WAS JUST... FUCK.

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forevershining May 2 2012, 21:52:13 UTC
is that....a good thing, or? ; v ;

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envybleedsgreen May 2 2012, 23:31:40 UTC
A GOOD THING, MY NEW FRIEND.

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forevershining May 3 2012, 01:05:39 UTC
Oh! New friend! ; ; -hugs-

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fishyislove February 10 2014, 01:45:49 UTC
lol yaiy for seductive voice of chanyeols

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