[On-Going] Dodging Bullets: 02

[forever_smilez]

Title: Dodging Bullets
Author: forever_smilez 
Length: Chaptered [2/?] 2,908 words
Pairings: Major: Junsu/Jaejoong | Junsu/ Yunho Minor: Yoochun/Liyin | Hankyung/Yeonhee
Rating: R [Contains strong language, sexual references.]
Genre: Angst, Romance.
Summary: Boxer vs Cop. Drugs vs Guns. Yunho vs Jaejoong. Winner takes all, Kim Junsu, his love, his heart, his

Comments

[lammyellaxxx]

SPOT!!! stalking you back!
runs off to read...

[forever_smilez]

STALKER!!
NO don't read! It's crap! :( x

[lammyellaxxx]

it is NOT crap...how dare you criticise your own writing!!! :)))

[lammyellaxxx]

"Hey...I didn't think my good looks would send you straight into my arms this soon" oh the cheese....lol

you are such a tease with the almost smut scene...but i suppose Su shouldn't be taken advantage off!hehe :D

Bad Yunho for changing into such an ass! :x but Su really needs to stop making excuses because sooner or later, they're gonna run out.(But then again Jae's hopefully gonna be there, so all is good!lol)

i want Jaesu interaction!!!!pretty please...^^

&hearts

[su_milk_jun]

SPOT

I will read when I weak up tomorrow -_-

[forever_smilez]

Take your time lovey :D

[ekin_hardy]

whatever happens to yunho untiil he becomes like that...

and their flashback memories is soo swet, I pity Hosu..but I want Jaesu too...

[forever_smilez]

Yunho's past will be revealed soon :)
There's a underlining love between Hosu, but if Yunho doesn't fix up soon he'll lose Su!
Thanks for commenting ♥

[jihae_shii]

yeeep yunnie...get your act straight!!! Dx

[forever_smilez]

Yes or you have Jae to answer for! XD
Thanks for reading ♥

[xkilluax]

They did love each other. What a pity.

"Reminiscing about the day where they first met was what Junsu did almost every day for the past few weeks, it was what keep him sitting in their house, holding Yunho’s hand and loving him for another day."

Poor my Su, he needs the present and the future, too. I hope Yunho will open his eyes in time, or he will get loss. But in the otherway, I'm expecting Jae to rescue the little dolphin ^O^. He he, I like dramatic :">. Thanks for updating.

[forever_smilez]

I think they still do...:(
LOL Yunho will have to be quick competition is closer than he knows. Dramatic is on it's way :D Thanks for commenting and reading ♥