[On-Going] Dodging Bullets: 01

[forever_smilez]

Title: Dodging Bullets
Author: forever_smilez 
Length: Chaptered [1/?]
Pairings: Major: Junsu/Jaejoong | Junsu/ Yunho Minor: Yoochun/Liyin | Hankyung/Yeonhee
Rating: R [Contains strong language, drug reference, use of guns...]
Genre: Angst, Romance.
Summary: Boxer vs Cop. Drugs vs Guns. Yunho vs Jaejoong. Winner takes all, Kim Junsu, his love, his heart, his

Comments

[lammyellaxxx]

i stayed up waiting for this, and it's soooo worth it!!!
Jae the cop is sooo cool...(Chun as well) ^^
Yunho seems like an ass and he doesn't seem to care about poor Su, who always seem to be waiting. :( sighs....i suppose love is blind?

can't wait for more, off to bed now! xxx
(p.s. i think at the part where Siwon and Yunho goes up to the office at the club, you wrote Jae's office when it's meant to be yunho's.)

&hearts

[forever_smilez]

You're still awake!!
Is it alright? i practically re-write most of it!
Ah thank you! I've checked it over and over and couldn't spot anything lol, i knew i could rely on you XD
And LJ is pissing me off saying my post is too long!

:D ♥

[lammyellaxxx]

I was trying to get some work done but that hasn't happened.lol
you did great, I think it's even better than before!!! No worries there. Xxx

no probs, I think you just forgot to change it from before that's all! Hehe (-^_^-)
lj is a bother but you've managed to fit all of this chapter in right? If jot, then just put in in next chap, soon! :D

&hearts

[forever_smilez]

Good! After re-reading the previous one i was like 'what was was i thinking back then!?' LOL
Thank you! <3

Argh! I managed to fit it all in eventually it took me forever but i had to paste it the old fashion way on the html thing! lol

Now go to bed! XD Uni in a few hours :( *cries* my timetable is SO SHIT!

[shinchul303]

Lame quotes because I LOVE this fic:
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"There was never any time to just sit and think.

He wants to set his mind straight; to lay down his life, to make the right decisions, to do what’s right...

But time gets in the way [aish...honto neh]

--it flies by so quickly that life is dragged along with it.

Hasty decisions, pulled into a relationship drifting apart; avoidance becoming something of a regular.

“...I don’t dance like I used to anymore.”

It was a small world; word always got round one way or another."

I am...stultified with your entry.

[forever_smilez]

Aw i'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Thanks for reading ♥

[jihae_shii]

ohooo yunnie you should be more caring towards your duckbutt boyfriend!

[forever_smilez]

Yes he should! XD
Thanks for reading♥

[ekin_hardy]

Hi..New reader..

I love Hosu vs Jaesu plot....not the ordinary OTP...n coz I'm bias Su...lol

So now we know who's the police n who's the boxer...

"The power that was slowly diminishing beyond his knowledge." -- Su's fed up I guess? Or coz there's Jae now to take care of Su?

[forever_smilez]

Hey :)
Not it's not the usual OTP, lol su bias. I'm so Jaesu bias that its harder to write hosu hehe XD
Su can only take so much, so yunho really needs to fix up before he loses su!

Thanks for reading! ♥

[xkilluax]

Ouch, Yunho doesn't treasure his love *for now, I guess*, it will go sooner or later >.<
Thanks for updating ^^.

[forever_smilez]

Yep the boy better shape up before he loses Junsu! :)
Thank you for reading ♥