Society of Superheroes | Chapter Two | Initiation II

[foretos]

Title: Society of Superheroes Series
Characters: Kris, Lay, Chanyeol, C.A.P, Tiffany, Taewoon, Jaehyo
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 10k
Warning: Language and violent themes.
Author Notes: This is a Superhero AU based fic series. Comments and critiques are welcome and encouraged!

Comments

[xswampwitch]

SPOT FOR ME I HAVE CLAIMED IT BECAUSE I AM GOING TO GUSH THE FUCK OUTTA THIS WHEN I'M DONE

[xswampwitch]

ok so i apologize in advance for how nonsensical this is gonna get but WHATEV OK

)))))': again lay's fear of authority is like my most favorite thing ever is it ok if he's my favorite character because he might be. T __T sobs

BUT CHANYEOL oh my gOD his... idk. idk what to say about it. he's so childlike it's sort of perfect and i'm in love with the attachment he has to kris and how he's like a puppy and ugh uGHHHndskjdnffg it's perfect. just like, idk, without even trying it's like you imply that chanyeol has attachment issues and i love it soo muuuuch like he's stuck in this key stage of development as a child or something and blaRgh i love it. brotp 5ever thnx.

* __* sandeul and taewoon and jay kim easter eggies i am the happiest blaaljnaksnfsdnf. BUT JAEHYO TELEPATHICALLY FRYING CAP'S BRAIN LIKE AN EGG oh my g o d. i honestly didn't see that one coming man good job good job.

also i love the way you write battle scenes F _F

i just love all of this DON'T JUDGE ME GET OUT DA WAY

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lololol Everyone's judging me for this tbh OTL
I hope I don't have that many battle scenes because those are a pain to write out. There's only so many times I can write punches and jumps before I go crazy.

[littlevirus]

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG what is going on what is tiffany hiding the big five odg akjsdgbajskbdaks omfg jaehyo what did he do kjasbdkja is taewoon alive kjebdajksdbajkdbaslfan bye CAP byeeeeeeeeeeee asldjnaskja

chanyeol's so adorable can i like hold him and never let him go akjdbakj it's getting even more exciting

pleaseeee updateeeeeee soon, johhhnnnn*O*

[foretos]

You hit all the good points tbh.
And yeah, I was sort of going for a JL feel for this place.
It'll be kinda like that plus a little of the X-Men?
We'll see how this goes~

[soundsofjewels]

o h m y g o o d n e s s this is so. damn. good.
i'm still awestruck kay just please update soooooon

[cairistiona]

Oooohooohoooooh. It took me ages to find this chapter but *___*