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foretos

Society of Superheroes | Chapter One | Initiation

May 04, 2012 02:21

Title: Society of Superheroes Series
Characters: Kris, Lay, Chanyeol, C.A.P
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 10k
Warning: Language and violent themes.
Author Notes: Comments and critiques are welcome and encouraged. Please watch over me and thank you for taking the time to read!
( Initiation )

chanyeol, exo, c.a.p, superhero au, teen top, kris, society of superheroes, lay

Comments 22

nebulaa May 5 2012, 01:29:38 UTC

wowowow ! I'm really liking this ! The storyline is very interesting & your writing provides great imagery, along with good portrayal of emotion . I'm really looking forward to the next part .

foretos May 5 2012, 05:21:45 UTC

Thank you very much! I was worried it might be too wordy or not enough. But I'm glad you like it! I'll try to make the next part more exciting. n o n

naochii May 5 2012, 01:44:28 UTC

Exo with powers! *O*
Nice plot! I like your writing and the characterization :D (poor chanyeol btw ;;)
Looking forward for the next chapter!!

foretos May 5 2012, 05:23:12 UTC

Soon to be most of the K-Pop world with superpowers! The Chanyeol side story sort of just grew as the chapter was written and I just went with it. I tried to make it very emotional. I'll try to make the next part even better!

nguyetdan May 5 2012, 03:36:07 UTC

Hello,

We're from a Vietnamese translating group. We'd love to ask you for permission to translate your wonderful fic into Vietnamese. We wish to contribute your fantastic fic to Vietnamese readers. Therefore, your permission is really important to us in order to translate the fic. Of course, we'd keep your credit. Finally, thank you so very much for giving us the permission.

P/s: We'd like to have your permission for all of your projects, just in case members would like to translate them , we won't have to bother you again. That is if you will be so kind to give us permission ^^.If you don't want to give permission for all of your fics then we'll ask for them later when we need them.

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foretos May 5 2012, 05:24:52 UTC

Hi! Well, for now I'm going to have to answer with no. When I have a good footing for this series, then I'll probably be okay with translations. But for now, I'd rather not have any because I might bomb it later on or something. > n < ;

nguyetdan May 5 2012, 09:16:19 UTC

So can you communicate with me soon when you accept? I'm waiting for the next chapter. Fighting!^^. I wish you to be healthy and happy.

foretos May 6 2012, 03:41:07 UTC

Yeah, I'll try to message you if I change my mind. n u n

amberc_13 May 5 2012, 10:51:46 UTC

I love this story! Will u be pairing anybody? (I'm a Krisyeol fan, kekekeke, just sayin ^^)
Update soon, aight? xoxo

foretos May 6 2012, 03:42:35 UTC

Thank you! Well for now I don't really have any plans for pairings. The Kris and Chanyeol dynamic in this chapter is sort of odd I think, but it might be developed later on. We'll just have to see!

amberc_13 May 6 2012, 09:03:41 UTC

Hahaha, it's okay, I don't mind really ^^ It's a really good story, an interesting plot, smooth transition between scenes, good emotion conveyance and it incurs readers to visualise as the story goes on.
Keep up the good work, dear! ^^ I'll be waiting for the next chap, aight? xoxo

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foretos May 6 2012, 07:47:30 UTC

Wow I feel pretty embarrassed haha. This is much more praise than I expected when I wrote this chapter. I didn't think I'd do a good job with introducing this series with these characters, but I'm very happy you are enjoying it! Thank you! As for Chanyeol, I'd like to think his story will just get better from here, but we'll just have to see! ^ o ^