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foretinterdite

Physics drabbles

Jan 23, 2008 14:51

1. Ron paced backwards, at a slow but constant rate, flaunting his cock just out of Harry’s reach. The brunette crawled after him, peering up through his sweaty fringe at his goal and growling with frustrated desire. The smell of spilled firewhiskey sharp in the air, Ron shook his own tangled locks aside, licked his lips, and began to taunt his ( Read more... )

harry/ron

Comments 19

redsnake05 January 24 2008, 00:00:33 UTC

Newton's laws should always be taught using porn! I am honoured to have been the unwitting catalyst for such fine ficlets. Lovely. I particularly liked Harry levitating them in the first one.

foretinterdite January 24 2008, 00:31:28 UTC

Glad you liked them. Thanks!

ms_worplesdon January 24 2008, 01:25:22 UTC

The first one- Oh my god. That image is going to be stuck in my head all evening! 8O

The second one- I want those sheets.

"Inside me."

GUH!!! Also, I love your description of the delicious burn and how he makes the bed sway pounding into him (I'm feeling a bit violent at the moment, sorry).

Loved these. Write more please?

foretinterdite January 24 2008, 05:31:58 UTC

I want those sheets. Ha! I'm a little obsessed myself. New linens is damn near the top of the things-to-buy-when-I-get-a-better-job list.

Thanks for the violent Guh! I'll try to write more.

earth_dragon January 24 2008, 02:35:58 UTC

you are a genius and i love you! :D this is the ONLY way to study physics, it should be manditory!

foretinterdite January 24 2008, 05:33:40 UTC

the ONLY way to study physics
I dunno. My prof had this little red wagon with a fire extinguisher propulsion system... No, you're right. ;)

roelliej January 24 2008, 05:58:32 UTC

"Inside me!"
Miauw!! ;)
Great job :D

foretinterdite January 30 2008, 06:23:13 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! (sorry for the late reply, stupid real life.)

tailoredshirt January 24 2008, 06:20:04 UTC

I second trubbleclef's violent GUH! I love the idea of them having sex in mid-air, and no doubt I will dream about it tonight. And #3 was really hot. And so was #1 with the smell of firewhiskey and the sweaty fringe. I think my favorite, though, was #2 because I could easily picture it happening and could feel Harry's frustration.

Sorry, this comment makes little sense. I should have just gone with a *flails* and been done with it. So...

*flails*

foretinterdite January 30 2008, 06:24:49 UTC

*grins*
so spill, were there porn-y floating dreams?

Glad you liked it!