Deadpool. Weapon, Part I: The Devil

Jun 16, 2008 22:29

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lady_of_mists June 18 2008, 15:13:19 UTC
Oh, dear. Hearts are *always* a bad sign, Deadpool. Always.

And a hilarious end to this fight scene! Kudos!

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foresthouse June 18 2008, 17:22:40 UTC
Particularly for him, heh. He NEVER has good luck with Teh Women.

Yay! Glad you liked it. Writing such visual stuff as fighting is definitely a challenging writing exercise.

:)

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lady_of_mists June 18 2008, 18:22:22 UTC
:laughs: I can imagine that he wouldn't. He tends to run off a bit at the mouth. It would take a very special woman to put up with that. ;)

And it is. I hate fight scenes and my book has several that I need to work on/edit. I'm not good with description, you see. Looking forward to the next part! :)

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foresthouse June 18 2008, 18:49:58 UTC
And he's got low self-esteem, and/or the women are either crazy, fighting on the other side in a merc-type situation, or don't approve of what he does for a living. And also he's ugly as all get-out, heh. So sometimes he uses a holographic image-inducer, and sometimes he just hides from people via the mask etc.

The artists tend to vary what he looks like, but at the very least, his entire body is covered with scar tissue, sores, and/or cancer tumors (look at his arms in the icon I'm using). Some go further, and draw him with misshapen ears and stuff. Sometimes they mention that it looks like terrible acne. And there was one truly horrible rendition where he had a lazy eye as well (I tend to not think of that one as canon, because it was in a one-off issue with different writers/artists/etc. than usual. And also because how could he be as coordinated as he is if there's something wrong with his eyes?)

Yay! The next part will be a change from the fight scenes, although...there may be more action coming up!

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gestalt1 June 18 2008, 15:24:36 UTC
Lolz, random MST-ing. Blind Al is teh awesome. And why is DP in my head now reffering to T-Bone only as T-Boner...?

This is just general win. You've got Deadpool's voice down pat! *yayz*

DUN DUN DUHNNNN! *ominous noises* A female! love interest! I am interested to see where teh plot point is leading...
*waits* ... *waits*

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foresthouse June 18 2008, 17:27:48 UTC
T-Boner, hee.

We are so juvenile. *g*

You've got Deadpool's voice down pat! *yayz*

Yayz indeed!!

I'm glad you're enjoying it. This one took awhile. Seriously, I think fight scenes are harder to write than sex, what with all the physical rather than verbal action. Thank goodness DP never shuts up - it makes letting people know what's happening easier. :)

I know. Finally, some potential romance in this fic. Excitement!!! (And of course, just because there's a female involved doesn't mean he might not have eyes for *hem* someone else later on...)

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gestalt1 June 18 2008, 17:46:37 UTC
He shall be T-Boner from now on...

Really, DP is always checking out the girls as well as guys so he does need to get some het action in fandom somewhere before he goes back to his one tru luv. Lolz. And yeah, I remember you saying Cable might make an appearance somewhere. XD XD

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foresthouse June 18 2008, 18:08:28 UTC
Oh, Cable is definitely coming.

Um...

*hem* You know what I mean.

Part II (when it gets here, about 6 chapters from now OMG) will be set in the midst of the C&D run, so Cable will be appearing for sure, although it'll still be a DP-centric fic. There'll be a time-leap, but threads from this story will be picked up there.

Apparently, when I decided to finally write a fanfic, I decided it must be Epic Fic. Hee.

he does need to get some het action in fandom somewhere

Seriously, I really think almost all DP fic is probably C&D fic. That's why I posted my fic in the C&D comm - because...there just really wasn't any other place where people were interested in reading a fic with DP, that I could find. :) Probably most of the people in the comm are all, "Where's the hot C&D tension? Pffft! We don't need your fic." But I'm glad a few people are enjoying it. *g*

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addygryff June 19 2008, 09:06:53 UTC
Gods, Deadpool's commentary during the fight scene was simply awesome, and so was him talking Deathstroke into 'hara-kiri'.
Heh.
Liking this quite a bit so far. ;D

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foresthouse June 19 2008, 17:39:23 UTC
Glad you're enjoying it!

Deadpool is so much cooler than Chuck Norris. ;)

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