Kiss And Make Up - Eden/Sylar/Gabriel - Gift!Fic -Drabble

Mar 11, 2008 21:40

Title: Kiss and Make Up
Author: force-oblique
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I dont own them...
Characters/Pairing:Eden/Sylar/Gabriel
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Summary: Just a Drabble for my lovely friend Dee, dana-serenity
Author's Notes: This was written on an impulse in like 10 minutes, because Dee prompted me with "Kiss and Make Up", so please don't hate me or be mean ( Read more... )

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dana_serenity March 11 2008, 19:56:26 UTC
Oh honey!! I just adore your way with words, it's so beautiful, the way he's starting to fight the drugs and recognising Eden as his soulmate. So rromantic!!

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force_oblique March 11 2008, 19:59:13 UTC
Aww, thanks!
I am so glad you liked it!!!
It was written in like 10 minutes so I might revise it! <333

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albion1919 March 11 2008, 20:40:12 UTC
AWWW! Why would anyone be mean? That was so bittersweet, the way that he lets his guard down but she’s just there to torment. And I've said before that you have a lovely way with language.

his last name is spelt Gray :)

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force_oblique March 11 2008, 20:43:38 UTC
Oopsie...fixed that! Heeh, Gray-Grey....meh, confusing! lol

THank you!!!
Yep, i's amazing how much you get me! lol
Most people would think it's just romance but it's still Eden there to mock him...Though it's not so clear in that! lol

But I do seem to be stuck on the glass wall thingie....
I think it's such a tur on... lol

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albion1919 March 11 2008, 20:51:19 UTC
I have to do that because the spell-check wants to change the "a".

When you get down to it it's pretty hard to justify Eden having feelings for a man she knows is a serial killer etc, so this is perfect.

Heehe! I've noticed! Very voyeuristic... ;)

Do you mind if I friend you?

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force_oblique March 11 2008, 20:56:16 UTC
Awww! I see!
Poor me doesnt have ms-office word installed on my new laptop though my brother is working on it, so there's no real spell-check for me...:(

Yeah, it's hard to think about it, although we have all heard of women in love with people in prison for unspeakable crimes, so... The human psyche is intriguing to say the least! lol =P

Yeah, I know, I just cannot helo it, too many possibilities! lol

Oh my, I have been meaning to ak you that for a long time, but I wasn't sure you wanted it because we have talked on various occassions but it never came up so I thought you didnt want it!

Erm, I am babbling, so what I want to say is...Wheee, yes, I'd love to! :D

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force_oblique March 11 2008, 21:30:29 UTC
Aww, hi Tanya!
Thank you :D

I am glad you liked it..Even though it is a bit rushed and crappy...
I wrote it in 10 mins..
I am so humble before you because I love your stories! ;)
I swear I have better... XD =P
*huggle*

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force_oblique March 11 2008, 21:48:27 UTC
Awww!
Don't blush,you know it's true....=P

Anyways..thank you so much... XD

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sotiria_auth March 12 2008, 06:53:26 UTC
That was so sweet qand cute! :)
He dares to exit his body, escape it and escape both physical and metaphorical restraints binding him and holding him back...

And he finds that it's nowhere else he'd rather be than by her side, hearing her breathe, touching her, lulling her to sleep and inside his arms forever.
Because it feels as if he's known her forever.
He'd recognize his soulmate anywhere...
Lovely!!

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force_oblique March 12 2008, 07:03:18 UTC
Thanks so much~~
I am so glad you liked it!

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lemomina July 17 2009, 19:02:50 UTC
Thats Not Crappy at all !!!
On the Contrary , Its Good and I like it :P :P

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