The Fire That Melts The Glass - Eden/Sylar -(Sequel) - PG

[force_oblique]

Title: The Fire That Melts The Glass - Part 2 - Sequel
Author: force-oblique
Rating: G, possibly AU
Disclaimer: I dont own anything! :P
Characters/Pairings: Eden /Sylar
Word Count: 1163
Summary: When Sylar was kept in the Company, Eden kept visiting him, drawn to him as if he were a drug she couldnt resist.
Author's Notes:This was written out of boredom,

Comments

[force_oblique]

Thank you very much for your kind words!!

Haunting? This is exactly what I was going for...

I think their whole hidden attraction, their relationship is haunting....

I was just trying to depict that! :)

[force_oblique]

*beams*
Thank you!

[albion1919]

That was great! Very poetic. I especially liked the line about her not breathing deeply because it was the same air as his.

I wouldn't mind more ;)

[force_oblique]

Awww!
Really?
You liked and you think it was poetic?
Thats so sweet of you, thank you so much!!!

[albion1919]

Yes really! You always have a really nice usage of language, it's descriptive and poetic :)

[force_oblique]

Awwww!
Thank you so much!!!
It means a lot since I am learning English still! lol

[dana_serenity]

Like a lady, whose beauty only an accomplished painter of the romantic era could capture.
Wowzers. Like really. Speechless.

When her eyes weren't as black as they were now, experience weighing heavy in them, darkening them.
This is such a powerful image. I can imagine her eyes really are like that. Sad little pixie girl :(

They were mising altogether...
Oh no, Eden is a broken toy Sylar can't fix!!! So sa-a-ad!

Holy crap, the last twenty lines or so, from the moment you mention the music box, are like... PERFECTION! I'm in tears! This is so beautiful! You write this ship so perfect and emotional!

[force_oblique]

OMG, those were my favorite parts too!:)
Awww your comments make me giddy and I love it!!!

I am so glad I elicited such an enthusiastic response heeh!!
I must have done something right this time! lol

Thanks for saying I write this ship beautifully! ;)

*hug*

[dana_serenity]

You know hun, I don't just say these things XD I really mean them with all my heart <333

[force_oblique]

Awwww...okies i am tearing up here...
You are made of awesome! :)

[sotiria_auth]

As if she were a ballerina in a music box, like the one his mother used to have.

A ballerina figurine that disappears once the box closes, the lid down but dances passionately, defiantly each time it opens up again.

What was the lid in her life? Was it the Company?

And who was the one who opened the nostalgic music box she called her life, her existence?

Was he the one who set her free each time? Was that why she kept coming to him?

*dies*

Perfect.....I'm speechless!

[force_oblique]

Thank you sweetie!
I am glad you liked it!!

[dream_infinity0]

wow you did it again, another beautiful written fic.

But she was the greatest, most intriguing puzzle he had ever encountered and though he was good at putting pieces back in place, back in order, it was not long till he realized that some pieces of her, were not just misplaced...

i love this line and the ending.... it ends it perfectly.

great work

[force_oblique]

Thank you so much tracey, your kind words always mean a lot to me! ;)