Personal Space- Elle/Sylar- Part 2/2 - (Version A)

Mar 26, 2008 23:42

Title: Personal Space - Part 2 (VA)
Author: force-oblique
Rating: G, possibly AU
Disclaimer: I dont own anything! :P
Characters/Pairings: Elle/Sylar
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Summary: A little while after Elle decides to move at her own apartment, she receives a surprise visit from Sylar.... Does he want revenge,her power or something else?
Author's Notes:This is written ( Read more... )

heroes fanfiction, fanfiction, elle bishop, sylar/elle fanfiction, sylar

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dream_infinity0 March 26 2008, 23:13:46 UTC
loved it....

can't wait for next season

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force_oblique March 27 2008, 05:04:07 UTC
Thanx hun! I am glad you enjoyed it! ^^

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sotiria_auth March 27 2008, 05:11:37 UTC
"I inspired you change what? Clothes?" - LOL
I could totally see her ask that!
And all her nasty,cynical remarks in her mind..it was so funny!

And it's been a while till we have seen Sylar be somewhat submissive! lol

And the ending....killed me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good job!

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force_oblique March 27 2008, 05:13:19 UTC
Thank you hun, I am glad you liked it!
Yeah in the beginning it was her trying to win some time...So she was actually fooling around...tittering! lol
Yeah the ending came to me last night and I was laughing but I didnt know if anyone else was going to think it was funny!

I have a weird sense of humor sometimes! lol

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sotiria_auth March 27 2008, 05:14:21 UTC
You do have a weird sense of humor but I get you because we are related! =P
I don't know if others will get you too!
It's really kinky in a way!!!

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force_oblique March 27 2008, 05:15:00 UTC
Heym whats kinky?
My sense of humor or the story? =P

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d_wndy March 27 2008, 22:41:42 UTC
aww i want a pet Sylar.. where would one buy that? great fic lol ;)

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force_oblique March 28 2008, 04:49:59 UTC
Hehe, yeah a pet Sylar would be so cool!!
I have no idea....maybe we should get a Sylar-dummie instead! LOL
Are there any Heroes dummies btw?

Thank you hun! ;)

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dana_serenity March 29 2008, 15:54:22 UTC
Wo-ow, I totally forgot to comment on this beauty!!

He catches her with ease, as if she were a much-wanted, ripe apple in the middle of summer and Elle can't help but titter at the thought “If life gives you apples make an apple-pie” crosses her mind.
LO-OL!!

His powerful, masculine scent fills her nostrils, making her head spin and as Elle wonders if her Donna Karan, apple perfume has the new female Axe-Effect, she is certain it will take more than throwing away the perfume to get him off her...
OMG the AXE-EFFECT FTW!!! Teehee!!! This is so so so brilliant!!

The to-do list is so so brilliant xD I enjoyed this fic so so much!

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force_oblique March 29 2008, 16:04:46 UTC
Awwwww, yay!!!
Thank you so much hun!!
I was really unsure about it, because it was written with my Muse gone! lol

Hehe, I am glad I gave youa few lols at least! :)
I intended it to be crack! =D

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force_oblique April 8 2008, 05:46:19 UTC
Hehe thanks hun!
I am glad you enjoyed it!
I wanted to make it a little fun...Hehe!
Pet!Sylar was a cool idea..now if only we could put it to practice! :);)=P

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