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Bury Me Tonight - Chuck/Blair - Blair POV - Part 1/1 - Complete

Feb 17, 2008 02:53

Title: Bury Me Tonight
Author: force-oblique
Rating: G, PG
Disclaimer: I dont own anything! :P
Characters/Pairings: Chuck/Blair - mention of Nate
Spoilers/Warnings: It's kind of vague but everything up to 1x13
Word Count: 1844
Summary: It is an emotional take on the last scene of Chuck/Blair in episode 1x13
Author's Notes:This is my fourth Gossip Girl ( Read more... )

fanfiction, fic, chuck/blair fanfiction, gossip girl fanfiction, gossip girl, blair/chuck

Comments 8

yourstrulytessa February 17 2008, 03:16:32 UTC

first of all, IT'S DEDICTATED TO MEEEEE XD XD XD XD XD!
that made my night, it really did. <3
and i know you didn't know this but the kill is one of my favorite songs ever and definately my favorite 30stm song so that's like perfectttttt.

It felt like watching a movie.
A film with an ending too bitter to endure and she was stuck in the scene where the knight in shining armor took off his helmet showing off just how fierce he could be, tearing his damsel into pieces.
Her fairytale had turned into tragedy, parody even….
But if she could stay like this, still, mobile, couldn’t it be like pressing “pause”?
Couldn’t things remain the way they were before this awful day?
If “rewind” wasn’t possible, couldn’t “pause” do the trick?this is my absolute favorite part of the fic because it is so clearrrr and beautiful and exactly what blair was feeling in that scene ( ... )

force_oblique February 17 2008, 09:20:02 UTC

Squeeeeeeeee!
I am so happy this gift fic made your night!!
It certainly made mine... It was like 3 a.m. when I wrote this!
I just couldn't sleep with all the plot bunnies in my head, hopping loose here and there!! lol

Omg, The Kill is one of your favorite songs? That's so cool and such a coincidence...See? This fic was screaming like a baby for you! LOL

Heh, the part you like is my favorite too! Although, at first I thought that maybe it was a little too much, but once I started I couldnt stop! lol

I'm so happy that you thought that I captured Blair's feelings well. I wasnt sure about this fic, because let's face it..I get Chuck better than I get Blair (dissing him all the time and all) LOL j/k

Thank you!

Would you be interested in being friends?
It's perfectly ok if you dont! :)

yourstrulytessa February 17 2008, 14:04:08 UTC

i knowwww, it's so perfect that the one dedicated to me would have one of my favorite songs in it. ♥

i thought you'd never ask ;D
hahaha of course, added.

force_oblique February 17 2008, 15:18:33 UTC

Yes, it was a happy coincidence!! Heeh, like destiny sorta! :P

Aww, coolies!
Thank you.
Adding back! Not that I am all that interesting of course! :D

xxxhow_bizarre February 17 2008, 04:45:13 UTC

SHNEEF! "THE KILL"!

Damn you always pick the best songs. XD you own.

I really enjoyed all of it, I think you really properly captured Blair and I love how she realizes she loves him and just. YAY. :)

force_oblique February 17 2008, 08:57:55 UTC

Thank you so much!!
I so adore music and I can't help but get inspiredafter I listen to particular songs...
So I need to use the lyrics in my fics afterwards! lol

I love the song too!

Thanks for the comment, the truth is that I wasn't really sure about this fic. I wrote it at 2 a.m. in the morning and I kept thinking it was crap but I decided to post it anyways...

What was the worst thing that could happen except for me being collectively lynched? lol

sotiria_auth February 17 2008, 10:06:41 UTC

OMG, yay!!
This is fiction is so emotional and sad!!
It is exactly the way I thought Blair felt as Chuck talked to her like that!
He was so mean! :(

I love so many parts in this!!
He looks like a statue, standing still, untouched, unaffected, unfeeling…
As if he were made out of stone.

And Blair knows she can’t hurt stone.

Not with her clenched fists, not with her words - even the most horrible ones- and certainly not with the tears she stubbornly refuses to reveal. - So true!!!

It felt like watching a movie.
A film with an ending too bitter to endure and she was stuck in the scene where the knight in shining armor took off his helmet showing off just how fierce he could be, tearing his damsel into pieces.This was such a lovely metaphor!! :)

But if she could stay like this, still, immobile, couldn’t it be like pressing “pause”?

Couldn’t things remain the way they were before this awful day?
If “rewind” wasn’t possible, couldn’t “pause” do the trick?This is just perfect...howdid you come up with this? :D ( ... )

force_oblique February 17 2008, 15:16:48 UTC

Thank you!
And you are so right, I mean he treated her so badly and the thing he said about the arabian horse rode hard and put away wet..it gave me chills!
That was the only thing I could do to make myself feel better....
No way he meant all that!!!

About the pause thing, funny you should mention that but my mom asked me in themronig what does "pause" mean and I explained itto her...so yep... while I was writing the fic....

Aww the last part was so speaking to me when I wrote it!
I actually had to stop myself from bursting into tears! lol

More are on the way! :D