The Prison Within - Adam/Elle ♥ - Chapter 9

[force_oblique]

Title: The Prison Within - Chapter 9
Author: force-oblique
Rating: G, possibly AU
Table/Prompt: Table #7,"helpless"
Disclaimer: I dont own anything! :P
Characters/Pairings: Adam/Elle - mention of other characters ,Adam's POV
Word Count: In Progress
Summary: While Adam was held captive in the company, he watched Elle grow. But more than that, the two of them

Comments

[sotiria_auth]

This was abeautiful insight into Adam's psyche!
I loved how he was scared of what Elle would think of him.
I like to think of him as a changed man. In your fic we barely ever saw him as evil.
You made us love him and that's what I love about this fic. :D

Totally adored the last sentences/paragraph! :D

[force_oblique]

I made you love Adam?
REally?
I'm so glad!!! :)
I'm happy you liked this part too!
You need to join adam-elle = <33

[sotiria_auth]

Yes you did!!
And I like that you changed the "Summary" for the fic. The sentence you have now is more like your fic.
They are indeed becoming soul mates in spite of their differences in age etc.

[force_oblique]

Aww! I thought nobody noticed! lol
Thanks ,i like it better too, even though it i sappy and kinda corny I guess! lol
Thanks, I want to show that!

[dream_infinity0]

this was really good, can't wait until they excaped ....that dreaded prison. great work again

[force_oblique]

I'm really happy that you liked this! :D
THank you!!! :D :D :D

[dana_serenity]

Yay! I'm finally reading!!

It felt like they were bottomless now, colder for they held knowledge and experience which was never supposed to be accumulated by only one person.
I love that you mention his eyes, I can see him thinking this.

Oh I wonder what he'll tell her!! Can't wait for the next one!

[force_oblique]

Aww!
I'm so glad you liked this part too!
Yes, his eyes are always complex in my mind. I always consider them to be the windows to one's soul, so there should be depth in them! :)

[fullwingedlove]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!

They are built for hugs and caresses. For the love a mother can give. That was the sweetest line that could be imagined...you shocked me so much my words no longer make sense.

I without a doubt loved it! I'm serious, there is not a single peep in my head that contains disapproval. (They're all highly in love with this artwork...JK((on the many voices part not on the complimenting of the writing part))) That was pure fantastique-ness! I seriously mean that. (Is it bad for me to never want this series to end? I mean it is pure spun brilliance...you should sell it or mainstream it or something. :P )

Oh and BTW how's the brother post-op? There I go again with the words. I mean it must've been tricky surgery!! Et toi? You held up fine and strong, I suppose. I'd be scared witless even if it wasn't me.

P.s. Lovesa the new layout pretty fancy diggs. :P

[force_oblique]

Awww!
I'm so happy that you still like it!
I am having doubts but comments like that make my day!
I will try to update this week though, I promise!
Haha,yeah a total commodity! =P
I'm already brainstorming a sequel sort of, called "Escape Artists".
If everything goes well there may be some more Adam/Elle loving even after TPW ends!

My brother is doing so much better. The scar is healing but the stiches ache...But other than that and the fact that he cant move extremely well, everything is fine!I'm so happy! :)
Yeah, I was so nervous and I couldnt sleep for days! I stayed at the hospital!

Btw, I have written some more Adelle fic you may like to check out if you ever have the time.
Even if you hate them, still there will be some Adelle for you! lol :)

Adam/Elle: Butterflies In A Balloon, Like A Christmas Tree

Take care
Kelly