Butterflies In A Balloon - Adam/Elle Fiction - PG-13

[force_oblique]

Title: Butterflies In A Balloon
Author: force-oblique
Rating: PG - 13? for mild sexual situation or allusion
Disclaimer: I dont own anything! :P
Characters/Pairings: Adam/Elle - mention of other characters
Word Count: 1542
Summary: Set in early s2, Adam's feelings and how he feels connected to Elle
Author's Notes: I feel kinda sad, so I guess this came out

Comments

[sotiria_auth]

This was so bittersweet, at least in the beginning, how Adam is trapped even within his own powers. I liked the idea of him being a butterfly trapped inside a balloon pretty on the outside but a prison all the same!

The ending was so Adelle!
Loved it!!!

[force_oblique]

Thank you baby!
I'm so glad you liked it, because I wasnt sure about it! ;)

[sotiria_auth]

Why weren't you sure?
What did you think was wrong with this story?

[force_oblique]

Meh, I dont know, like too many descriptions...kinda of going nowhere or something.

Too dark and too cryptic? You know I was ina bad mood, I hadnt slept due to my brother's surgery and I felt sad and lonely and so anxious I couldnt breathe in no other way than gasps!

[cherazz]

Awwww *tear* That was so sweet; bittersweet, yes! Poor Adam *pets him* I long to make you better =D Very nice job with this:)

[force_oblique]

Thank you!!
I am glad you liked it!!!
Yes, I was going for bittersweet, the only way I can see them (Adelle)!

[dream_infinity0]

As if she didn’t exist in his balloon - a caterpillar instead of a butterfly-, being still oblivious of the fact that it was big enough for two….

oh i love this......this was a very beautiful piece

great work

[force_oblique]

Aww!
Thanks Tracey!
I really appreciate your comments!!
That is my favorite part too! :)