The Prison Within - Adam/Elle ♥ - Adam's POV (Heroes Fiction) - Chapter One

[force_oblique]

Title: The Prison Within
Author: force-oblique
Rating: G,kinda sad,probably AU?
Table/Prompt: Table #7,"helpless"
Disclaimer: I dont own anything! :P
Characters/Pairings: Adam/Elle - mention of other characters , Adam's POV
Word Count: In progress... It will probably consist of 3 or 4 parts depending on my muse and free time! :P
Summary: Adam's reflection on

Comments

[meli_64]

Cool start! :D

[force_oblique]

Thankies! :D

[sotiria_auth]

That was so emotional!
I always like the way you write.
I really felt what he felt... Lonely, broken, alone...
And then:

And in the darkness, I whispered:

“That’s my girl!”

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[force_oblique]

Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Thanks,baby!!!
Really, you liked that?
I loved that line too!!!
It just came to me while I was writing the story and it just felt like it feel into place,you know?
*hug*

[sotiria_auth]

I am glad you kept the sentence!!!
It's really nice!
When are you posting the next part?

[force_oblique]

Probably later tonight or tomorrow!
Stay tuned!!

[spygrrl76]

Really great start! I love that last line...so perfect. :)

[force_oblique]

Oh, thank you! :)

[havemy_heart]

Love this a lot! *runs to read the next chapter*

[force_oblique]

Aww!
Thankies! ;)

[dana_serenity]

I know it took me a while to read this, but damn! now I regret not reading this sooner!! This is so great, love how you give an insight into Adam's emotions toward Yaeko and Hiro. Love love love!

*runs to read next chapter*

[force_oblique]

Aww! Thankies Dana! :) *hug*
Yeah , I wanted to show a more human aspect of Adam. Not just the revenge he wants to take as depicted in the show!!
I think he is a really tormented character!
I am working on a Adam Story right now! Hee!

[dana_serenity]

Yeah, I think that there's definitely a human aspect the show doesn't show us, but that's what we have fanfiction for ;)

Oh, I can't wait to read it!

[force_oblique]

Haha!
Yeah! That's what we have fanfiction for!! You are so right! ;)

Oh, thankies! I am not sure it will be very good but I will try! :)