What's Behind A Smile - Elle/Bob /Peter (as the catalyst) - (Elle-centric) -Heroes Fic

[force_oblique]

Title: What's Behind A Smile
Author: force-oblique
Rating: G
Disclaimer: I dont own anything! :P
Table,prompt: Table #7, "Passion"
Characters/Pairings: Elle/Bob - Peter acts as a catalyst ,Elle's POV
Word Count: 2.309
Summary: Elle's reflection on her life and how seeing Peter has changed that.
Author's Notes:I wrote it in the middle of the night…so excuse

Comments

[ghost_goodthing]

Hey,

I'll be sending you my notes on this on and the other one via email. It's better that way so you see what I mean better ( I marked them red..;)

Expect them tomorrow..

Loving it btw..

[force_oblique]

Squeee!
Thank you so much Jessica! I really appreciate it!!!
Yeah I know what you mean, it will be better through email!! More convenient for you too!!
Oh that soon? you rock!!!
THankies! :)

[flwrpwr_vampyre]

Oh I really liked the last line. You realize it's not about Peter, it's about Bob.

[force_oblique]

Thanks!

You know, I think you are right, it's just that I kept thinking of Peter setting in motion all these thoughts and feelings that I kinda lost that!
Peter merely acts as the catalyst, right?

I fixed it a little bit I think! :)

[flwrpwr_vampyre]

She'd get bored with Peter really fast anyway. He's just such a goody-two-shoes.

[force_oblique]

Do you think she would get bored of him?
To me she seems a little bit like a child and maybe Peter could influence her more than she could influence him.
Perhaps he could turn her into a more mature person... and less crazy too! lol

[dana_serenity]

Oh, I like this take on Elle very much *nods* Love what you said about always having to say 'yes' because it might be too dangerous to say 'no'. Great work!

[force_oblique]

Awww!
Thank you so much!!!
Woot! A nod! I love nods! =D

[motylik]

This was beautiful. I loved the last line. *sighs* I feel for Elle.

[force_oblique]

Thankies!
You know, I kinda think that there's more to her than meets the eye!
I think she is smarter than she looks and that she is indeed troubled! :)

[runawaycherie]

Wow, just wow. I really enjoyed it. It's nice getting into Elle's mind huh? The way you did this though makes me feel so bad for her. She could be that way... so lost. She has so many questions and wants answers...

I loved it.

[force_oblique]

Yeah, exactly!
I really enjoy getting into her mind- or trying to, because she is such a mysterious character! We know only a few things about her and she seems so tormented!!!!
Awww! Thanks!!
That was my intention, making everyone feel for her and maybe see her in a different, more positive light! :)