Beyond Redemption aka Breakable- Bionic Woman Fiction (Sarah Corvus)

[force_oblique]

Title: Beyond Redemption aka Breakable
Author: force-oblique
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Bite me! Ok, I dont own anything! :P
Characters/Pairings: Sarah Corvus/Mention of other characters
Word Count: 1492
Summary: Sarah’s feelings about the turn her life has taken.
Author's Notes: Might be crappy, especially since it is my very first try at a Bionic Woman Fiction

Comments

[cmk418]

This was very well done. I liked how you handled Sarah's analysis of herself - in the beginning very detached, until she comes into contact with Jae and the emotions that brings about. And that ending just brings it all home. I hope you write more on her in the future.

[force_oblique]

Thank you!
I really felt for her character and I think that somehow her real feelings and emotions (those that have nothing to do with the fact that she is dying) are overlooked in the show. We could learn so much more about her life, how she was chosen and everything.

I really hope we get a lot of Sarah scenes in the future!

Awesome!

[skywatcher38]

Very well written...it captures the part of Sarah we don't get to see. The true extent of how torn she is between humanity and bionics, for example. I loved reading it! Please write more in the future!

Peace,
Skywatcher38

Re: Awesome!

[force_oblique]

Aww!
Thankies! I am glad you liked it!I hope I can have something new up soon!
Take care!

[sotiria_auth]

I dont watch the show, but it's nicely written!

[force_oblique]

THank you!

[quiet_elle]

thats wow. you've captured sarah's thoughts beautifully and almost painfully (though in a vrey good way). I enjoyed reading.

[force_oblique]

THank you so much!
I'm happy you liked it! :)
I wasnt really sure about this fic because it had turned out too nagsty, but thanks! ;)

[quiet_elle]

sarah is all about the angst so this was great :)

[force_oblique]

Awww!
I didnt think that!!
I think you are right!!!
THank you! :D