Uncover- A Noah Bennet/Claire Fiction(Heroes) -Heroes15 Challenge

May 31, 2007 16:16

Title: Uncover aka The Guilt Within
Author: force-oblique
Rating: G
Disclaimer:Nobody is mine..but i would settle for Peter or Isaac or even Sylar...See? I am reasonable! :P! =D
Characters/Pairings: Mr Noah Bennett/A bit of Claire
Table/Prompt: Table #7, "Uncover"
Word Count: 1147
Summary: Mr Bennett's feelings as he is forced to keep things from Claire and ( Read more... )

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raissad June 2 2007, 15:28:18 UTC
Lovely!

All those times she took knives and forks and razors and used them to cut herself, to scar and to maim herself testing her limits.. It was me bleeding. It was me aching.

These lines sum it up perfectly. :)

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force_oblique June 2 2007, 17:13:26 UTC
Thank you!!! I really thought that even though he seemed a bit cold at first,in reality he was a very warm, endearing person and that he loved Claire very much!!!
I wanted to write a fic about that love! :)

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misst89 June 2 2007, 17:50:38 UTC
Kelly! Theresa here *wave* Love your story, im a big heroes fan :) You're super talented!!

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force_oblique June 2 2007, 18:08:14 UTC
Howdy Theri!!!!
So happy to see you here! *hug*
Thankies!!!
My best fic according to comments seems to be the following Revolve but Elusive is one of the weirdest ones i have written so i dont know! lol
Thankies so much again!!!

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dreamingwriter June 27 2007, 20:06:20 UTC
Wonderful! I can see HRG feeling this way. I actually felt sorry for him in your fic. Not a lot of people can make me do that. Keep writing!

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force_oblique June 27 2007, 20:28:58 UTC
Thanks for your sweet comment!!
I likeMr Bennetvery much. I dont know he just seemed very tormented and i love tormented characters! plus i believe that his fatherly love for Claire was very sweetlydepicted in the show,so there you have it....I was inspired! lol

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sotiria_auth November 28 2007, 00:19:09 UTC
I like HRG!
I think he is a very "emotionally charged" character and I loved your take on his feelings!
Well done!

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force_oblique December 15 2007, 00:21:09 UTC
Thank you!

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