Can't Stop The Killer - Sylar/Elle - PG - [1/1]

Jan 17, 2009 11:23

Title: Can't Stop The Killer
Author: force-oblique
Rating: PG-13 -
Disclaimer: I don't own anything! :P
Characters/Pairings: Sylar/Elle Bishop - Sylar's POV
Spoilers/Warnings: 3x12
Summary: And the smile and the bright blue eyes were enough to dazzle you as you looked at her from below.She found you on your knees literally and figuratively and this is the ( Read more... )

heroes fanfiction, fanfiction, elle bishop, fic, heroes, sylar, elle/sylar

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superkappa January 17 2009, 09:37:10 UTC
I'm glad I helped inspire you! I loved this story, the poetic flow of it was really awesome. A wonderful introspection into Sylar's "destiny" as a killer/villan. I loved it.

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force_oblique January 17 2009, 09:47:13 UTC
Hehe, yes you did! I had an idea in my head but I was too lazy to put it in paper! lol

Thanks so much...poetic flaw? *g*

Yes, I wanted to write something from Sylar's point of view...he is really fun to write! ^^

Thank you again!

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superkappa January 17 2009, 09:54:07 UTC
You're welcome!

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force_oblique January 17 2009, 09:54:49 UTC
=] *g*

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sotiria_auth January 17 2009, 09:51:21 UTC
Oh wow!
This really captivated me and drew me in (sp?)
You poor, little misguided boy!
You'd been waiting for years to meet someone like you.
Somebody broken, tainted, afraid.
Someone as scared as you, as unsure of himself as you are.
Somebody you could relate to, but nobody came.

Such a brilliant way to put it: He was the wolf in sheep's clothing and he was desperate to shed something...but it wasn't his shame it was the clothing...and now he is pure wolf!! wow!!

And I loved this whole train of thought:

Seeing everything in black and white was your biggest advantage wasn't it?
No moral gray, it was either black or white so there was no doubt, no hesitation.
But if you had so much clarity then why do you miss the colors she made you see?
Awesome story babe! <3

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force_oblique January 17 2009, 09:53:58 UTC
Awws thank you sweetie!!

I wanted to write something in Sylar's pov and it just came to me an hour ago! I wrote it in like 30 mins and I thought it might suck because I usually make a lot of mistakes when I write in a hurry! lol

Haha yeah..I dont know I just looked at my icon and then said: He is looking at me like he is a wolf and i am the preyand bam...it came to me! lol

Yes, I really think Elle made him change the way he looked at things...I believe he did see colors mostly because he surely fell in love, didn't he?

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sotiria_auth January 17 2009, 09:57:40 UTC
You are welcome! <3

You wrote this in 30 mins? I hate you!!
you make it seem so easy when it would take me or maybe even normal persons hours to come up with something as good as this! o_0
But then again, that's why it's called "talent" right? =P

Haha, the Sylar icon? He is kinda machiavellic...or whatever it's called in English!
Με καταλαβαίνεις εσύ έτσι κι αλλιώς σωστά? Χαχαχά!!

Elle did affect Sylar, we could see that because for the first time we saw him falter, waver...think twice...

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force_oblique January 17 2009, 10:02:20 UTC
:D

You don't hate me! You LOVE me! :P
Awws, thanks for your nice words but I think you are a bit exaggerating... It's not called talent, I think it's called product of boredom and cough medicine! :(
Did I tell you I am sick? I feel like crap, I have a runny nose and it's hard to breathe and I cough a lot too!

Ναι σε καταλαβαίνω γλυκούλι!! <3

Yes, exactly, I think her influence was quite evident, at least in my eyes! lol

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dana_serenity January 17 2009, 10:56:44 UTC
OMG I love these song lyrics ♥♥♥

Ah, but you should have known there are weapons more powerful than guns or swords.
OMG this is so so powerful!! and so true too!!

Seeing everything in black and white was your biggest advantage wasn't it? No moral grey, it was either black or white so there was no doubt, no hesitation.But if you had so much clarity then why do you miss the colors she made you see?
Just this whole thing made my jaw drop, seriously. It's so true and speaks volumes for the actions he took, why he turned on her so easily.

Thanks so much for the dedication darling. I love your writing and your way with words and the way you seem to penetrate the thoughts and feelings of Sylar or anyone so easily.

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force_oblique January 17 2009, 11:07:50 UTC
OMG yes arent they amazing?
The album is HERE
It's an awesome song!! I just adore Emery!

Heeh, I am so glad you liked it hun! I do believe appealing to emotions or to somebody's heart could be more powerful and effective than using a gun on him/her! <3

Awws, I am so happy you liked it! It just popped into my head because I was trying to understand him and why he killed her like that...and why she remained there without a fight too!!
It just made more sense to me like this! lol

You are so welcome hunni. You always make me happy with your comments!!
Yeah I have no idea why I write povs so often... I cant escape it..if I feel for someone I have to write it on paper! lol

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eternal_moonie January 17 2009, 12:49:25 UTC
I Totally LOVE it!!! Great job Kelly!

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force_oblique January 17 2009, 13:07:15 UTC
Awww thank you so much Jan! <3

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di_elle January 17 2009, 14:45:04 UTC
I'm speechless. That was a deep and fascinating view of Sylar's mind. wonderful.

Elle affected Sylar and I see her death by his hands like a sort of suicide again. Sylar killed also Gabriel, and what remains his soul and humanity, killing her.

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force_oblique January 17 2009, 15:23:06 UTC
Awww thank you so much!!
I really appreciate your comment! ^^

You know what? You are right,killing her was some for of suicide in a sense...
He was killing a part of himself...the better part...

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