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May 18, 2007 20:47

Title: How to Fall Apart
Author: mage_of_time
Fandom: KAT-TUN
Pairing: Akame, hints of Junno/Maru and Ueda/Jin.
Summary: He didn't...exactly... expect it to end happily. (Years later, Jin goes back.)
Notes: Unbeta'd. Written because I didn't feel like writing 52 Weeks.

the end shouldn't come like this, pressed between beer coupons and fishing magazines )

rps, fandom: johnny's entertainment, pairing: akame

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abstraque May 19 2007, 04:25:08 UTC
I liked how this was written. :)

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crazyforakame May 19 2007, 04:38:51 UTC
saddddddddddddd but it's goodddd

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vintersaga May 19 2007, 06:36:36 UTC
Wonderful. ^__^

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twirlingleaves May 19 2007, 07:08:28 UTC
I AM ACTUALLY CRYING, WHUT. I KIND OF WANT TO QUOTE THE WHOLE THING BACK AT YOU, BECAUSE EVERY SINGLE SENTENCE WAS SO GOOD. ;_________; BUT I WILL QUOTE SOME OF IT ANYWAY.

They had fallen out of the habit, and they didn’t want to try. Ueda tried to kiss him in the bathroom, in the third stall from the door (the one with the leaky pipe and broken light bulb.) Jin pushed him away after a moment. They laughed kind of sadly, and they walked away without saying anything else.

I like how you mentioned how that stall is the one with the leaky pipe and broken light bulb. It is a minor detail but somehow it adds so much to the fic.

Jin didn’t really mind-he hadn’t expected him to be, it was just nice to pretend that he could somehow go back to summer nights and fireflies and soft brown eyes.

SUMMER NIGHTS AND FIREFLIES AND SOFT BROWN EYES ASLKDJASLKJD. ♥ DIES. I think that is like my favourite part of the whole fic. I don't know why I like it so much, but I just do.

It was a secret, of tangled bedsheets and rough kisses and morning ( ... )

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marilena_r May 19 2007, 08:11:11 UTC
Seriously... I can't read it all. I am at verge of tears for various reason... this is too much. Really beautifull... But WHY?

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