Comments | fora_da_poeira: i cried when i wrote this, i've never done that before;

fora_da_poeira

i cried when i wrote this, i've never done that before;

Feb 12, 2005 00:52

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imjrmn2 February 12 2005, 20:32:03 UTC

This is beautifully done, as always, but profoundly sad. I'm left with a residual feeling of despair. It is very moving. *hugs*

I'm glad to see you are writing again even if it is so sad.

autumnsea February 16 2005, 10:42:45 UTC

it's like looking out from my own eyes and feeling the things I hold down deep inside.

very real Erin.

you certainly know how to convey true emotion.

because I was breaking into
a thousand little pieces
and you looked
but you didn't see
and cried
but you didn't hear

this resonated with me very deeply. yes this is how I wish they knew how deep they hurt me.

wonderful piece.

fora_da_poeira February 22 2005, 04:32:00 UTC

thank you. i'm glad it spoke to you. this is a very, very personal piece for me. i can hardly read it without crying, still.